Viktoria Jovanovic-Krstic
University of Toronto
viktoria.jovanovic.krstic@utoronto.ca
Framing the War on Terrorism? Linguistics Variation, Perspective and Iraq
October 7, 2002, President George Bush delivered his Address to the
Nation on Iraq stating quite firmly:
America believes that all people are entitled to hope and human rights
- to the non-negotiable demands of human dignity. People
everywhere prefer freedom to slavery; prosperity to squalor,
self-government to the rule of terror and torture. America is a
friend to the people of Iraq. (October 7 2002 whitehouse.gov).
Shortly after President Bush's Address, the
"war on terror" was expanded to include Iraq. In the press,
perspective is everything, and nowhere has this been more apparent in
recent history than in the much publicized war on terrorism. Ideally,
the fundamental function of press journalism is to inform the reader;
therefore, a journalist's interpersonal positioning must enable or
facilitate negotiation not only with readers but also with the
institutions directly implicated by the stories being produced (Martin
and White 2005). Spinning and framing is therefore at once both
linguistic manipulation and variation, as well as strategic packaging,
including but not limited to, the physical placement of the story and
the exposure of key terms and ideas, such as `war on terrorism.' When
journalists frame news stories, they express and strategically
manipulate rhetoric, sources, positioning, tone, and headlines with the
purpose of representing and presenting a particular perspective on
`reality;' it is the classic case of
same news, different views.
This paper will demonstrate that the press
frames and varies the perspective of news stories in order to achieve a
particular ideological goal. The focus is a comparative account of the
third year anniversary of the American-led invasion of Iraq,
examining Guy Gugliotta's (March 19 2006) assessment of America's
military effort in the war on terror in Iraq (washingtonpost.com) and a
similar article written by Nedra Pickler (March 20 2006, boston.com
article). Using Appraisal Theory's systems of
Attitude, Engagement, and Graduation
the focus will be on how writers use rhetoric to pass judgment,
appreciate situations, and express attitude and emotion towards the
events in question. Since attribution of external sources effects the
framing of information in news stories, the paper will also compare
aspects of intertextual positioning within the two texts.
Framing: a rhetoric
According to J. Herbert Alstschull (1984),
information in the press is a direct result of the ideology of the
times. The news is framed to present the content of the day (Borchers
2005). Hence, framing is a product not only of the institution of the
press, but also of those who finance the press and those who control
politics (Hicks 2006). Frames resemble topics or central themes, in
that they organize the news story to make it accessible and interesting
to the reader. Frames are also metaphorical in nature; they present the
something-is-like-something else relationship to readers and this
helps readers make connections, often between things they would never
consider connecting on their own. From a placement perspective, frames
are usually grouped together in a logical manner; hence, combatitive,
consensus and conjecture frames are the typical frames found in war
reporting. Metaphorically, these three typical frames tend to reflect
the America-as-Hero, the State-as-Person System, and
particularly in the current war on terrorism, the Fairy-Tale of the
Just War (Lakoff, 1991, 2003). Taking each of these typical frames In
turn, combative frames are usually centered around very specific themes
or topics. Since the beginning of the war on terror, the combative
frames characterizing many newspaper articles have revolved around
playing out a number of very popular metaphorical scenarios,
specifically War-as-Violent-Crime, where there are clear winners
and losers. According to Lakoff, (1991: 4) this metaphor "highlights
strategic thinking, team work, preparedness, the spectators in the
world arena, the glory of winning and the shame of defeat". Another
common metaphorical frame is that of the Irrational Villain. In the
current war on terror, Saddam Hussein was presented as above all
cunning, strategic and evil. Hence, it was clear from the beginning
that as well as being amoral, vicious, and a villain, he was also
irrational - the key ingredient to convince a reading public that
war alone would improve the situation in present day Iraq and rid the
world of weapons of mass destruction. Finally, in order for the
metaphorical frame of the Fairy Tale of the
Just War to be believable, it must contain a
hero who survives a treacherous terrain and an evil monster whom the
hero must engage in battle and conquer. Victory can only be achieved in
the Fairy-Tale of the Just War when the villain is defeated and the
victim or victims are rescued (Lakoff 1991: 2).
Appraisal Theory and the rhetoric of framing
As a method of analyzing discourse,
Appraisal
Theory
(AT)
concerns itself with how writers express and negotiate ideological
positions. The-se beliefs usually take the position of binary opposites:
good or bad, appropriate or inappropriate behaviour, and they tend to
illustrate what should or should not happen in the world, thereby
setting one society or culture apart from another.
Appraisal
Theory is a functional theory which views
language from a social perspective as a theory of choice. Hence, it
stems from the notion that writers make choices and that these choices
are subjective not objective. Thus, writers choose to present the news
in one way as opposed to another; they choose to represent information
strategically by avoiding certain issues and concentrating on others.
Like many theories,
AT is
ideologically laden, but it chooses to examine ideology
lexicogrammatically by defining and describing how writers use language
to examine, negotiate and maintain their ideology.
Appraisal
Theory examines negotiation in action based
on three very specific systems: the system of
Attitude,
the system of
Engagement
and the system of Graduation.
Attitude - the system of Evaluation: Affect, Judgment, Appreciation
As a method of analyzing discourse, AT
concerns itself with how writers express and negotiate ideological
positions in discourse.
Attitude
is the system which examines the rhetoric of evaluation, attitude, and
emotion based on the sub-systems of
Affect,
Judgment
and
Appreciation.
Attitude: Affect
Affect is
concerned with how writers construe emotion. In the press, emotion can
be represented either Authorially, using the first person, or
Non-Authorially, where the writer is the source of the emotion by
which evaluation is conveyed or where what is being described is not
the writer's emotions but those of other people or groups (Iedema et
al. 1994). Writers who construe emotion in their articles put
solidarity between themselves and the readers at risk, since solidarity
can only be maintained if the reader agrees with the writer's position
and the evaluation of the phenomena in question (Iedema et al.,
1994).
Attitude: Judgment
The subsystem Judgment is concerned with how writers evaluate people based on socially accepted norms. Appraisal Theory recognizes two mutually exclusive perspectives: Social Esteem and Social Sanction.
Social Esteem is based on evaluations in which the
person or group being judged is raised or lowered in the esteem of his,
her or their community; social esteem has no legal or moral
implications. It is concerned with evaluations of Normality, Capacity,
and Tenacity (White 2006) measured on a cline of positive and
negative.
Social Sanction is based on evaluations in which the person or group is being judged on the basis of legality or morality. Social Sanction is concerned with evaluations of Veracity (truth) and Propriety (ethics). Like Social Esteem,
Social Sanction is measured on a cline of positive and negative.
Writers may indicate Judgment in one of two ways: explicitly or implicitly. Explicit Judgment is clearly indicated with a lexical marker which shows a positive or negative evaluation, for example: "What a
monster!"
Implicit Judgment may be less clear-cut. The system of Attitude: Judgment recognizes two types of implicit judgment: Evoked Judgment and Provoked
Judgment.
Evoked: Judgment has no evaluative language present in the proposition; nevertheless, although it appears factual, the information which is presented still
manages to imply either positive or negative evaluation because it stands out from what can be considered normal/abnormal or good/bad behaviour, for example: "Bush marks Iraq date, omits using `war' word" (Judgment: evoked: negative: veracity - target Bush) (Pickler, headline, Associated Press, Boston Globe, boston.com March 20, 2006) and "For some, the temptation to retreat
and abandon our commitments is strong," (Gugliotta, quoting Bush, clause 4, Washington Post, March 19, 2006). (Judgment: evoked: negative: social esteem: tenacity: resolve. Target: those who wish to abandon the efforts of the government).
Provoked: Judgment also has no explicit markers of Judgment, but evaluative language is being used to direct the reader towards either a positive or negative
evaluation of some person or group of people, for example "Turning our
backs on postwar Iraq today would be the modern equivalent of handing
postwar Germany back to the Nazis" (Pickler quoting Rumsfeld, March
20, 2006).
Attitude: Appreciation
Appreciation is concerned with how writers evaluate products and processes based on the subsystems of Reaction, Composition, and Valuation.
Hence, under Reaction a product or process is examined from the perspective of its impact (either positive or negative) on the writer; under Composition
the makeup of a product or process is evaluated either positively or
negatively; finally, under Valuation the evaluation is concerned with the content of the product or process according to popular social convention.
Engagement - the discourse of framing: sourcing and intertextual dialogism
Engagement is the system whereby writers regulate and negotiate the arguability of their utterances, and it is concerned with the resources that writers
use to include and adopt a position towards what they typify as the
viewpoints, opinions, and words of other writers and/or speakers
(Iedema et al., 1994; White 1998, 2007a, 2007b). This notion of
objectivity is construed through the use of quoted material and through
the belief that, for the most part, journalists have been "taught" to
view the world in an objective fashion and to present their findings
accordingly. Nevertheless, a study by the
Project for Excellence in Journalism (PEJ) 2006 have found that the
typical narrative frame of the inverted pyramid (the straight news
account of a story) accounted for only 16% of front page stories. The
remaining stories all revolved around frames which required some level
of interpretation from the journalist: a subjective perspective. In
short, according to the PEJ journalists are taking a decidedly
interpretative role in their presentation of the news. By framing the
news around stories of conflict, injustice, irony, winners and losers,
journalists are framing an ideological perspective - one which
inadvertently dominates how a story may be interpreted and accepted by
the reading public. Hence, as White (1998) notes, "even the most
ostensibly `factual' report will be the product of numerous value
judgments" (White 1994:3). These judgments determine what goes into
the article and what stays out, and which sources are quoted directly
and those which are presented as reported projections of information
that has already been interpreted and, at the very least, analyzed.
This next section examines how the system of Engagement: Attribution and Sourcing can be used to analyze framing effectively in text.
Engagement: Attribution and Sourcing
Under the framework for the system of Engagement,
a number of options enable a writer to vary the terms by which he or
she engages with attributed sources and alternate positions in the news
article (White 2007a, 2007b; Iedema et al., 1994). Hence, writers frame
how they present a proposition through the sources which they choose to
include (or avoid) and through the grammatical resources of the
language that allow them to choose how they will represent a
proposition to readers. When writers opt to explicitly cite personal
names, or to identify groups and/or people as source types, they
construct a relationship of trust with the reader based on the belief
that they are attempting to provide reliable and truthful information.
The opposite is said to be true when generic, unnamed, or collective
sources are used; then, writers actively choose to distance themselves
from the issue, and therefore risk presenting information which is too
general or untrue - information that they choose not to take
responsibility for. Hence, by examining not only who is taking
responsibility for the utterance, but also how much responsibility is
being attributed, as well as whether the writer is purposefully
distancing him or herself from the utterance by using disendorsed
attribution. Issues such as these are interesting from a rhetorical
perspective because they recognize that the utterance invariably
affects the rhetorical thrust of the text and solidarity between the
reader and the writer.
Endorsement and Disendorsement issues of relevance
This presentation of data must be further evaluated as being either neutral, endorsed, or disendorsed, and then as either closed or open to further dialogic positions according to the implications each choice carries. Neutral
utterances are typically set off by the verb `to say.' Neutrality implies that the writer neither believes nor questions the truth validity of the proposition(s), but rather is just presenting the information. Endorsed utterances are those which the author indicates support for or agreement with the proposition either directly or indirectly. Endorsed utterances are therefore represented as being reliable or true and in the very least, convincing and believable, for example: "He also pointed out that Iraqi political leaders themselves called for calm after the Samarra attack" (Hauser, clause 24 NYT, March 19, 2006). White (2007b) also points out that writers may, at once, indicate that they support or endorse a proposition at the same time as they distance themselves:
the President finally acknowledged that he had made a mistake1. Here the lexical item
acknowledge carries with it many connotations. First,
acknowledge indicates that the President only hesitantly came to offer up the proposition
that he had made a mistake. Indeed, (
finally)
acknowledged carries with the same implications as conceded or admit in that the President was somehow made to admit the
truth,
that he had made a mistake. Therefore, although the proposition may be true, the positive endorsement is not of the quoted source but of the proposition itself (White 2007b). Disendorsement allows writers to distance themselves from an utterance through quoting verbs such as "to claim" and "to
allege." Specific lexical items such as `surprisingly," for example, also serve to indicate disendorsement in a somewhat more indirect manner because the proposition is set up to be read as unexpected, unusual or uncharacteristic. White (2006) also recognizes that disendorsement allows writers to deny or reject the attributed proposition.
The system of Engagement allows a writer to make a choice with respect to endorsement: if he or she choose non-endorsing, he or she agrees to be
neutral, but, if the choice is one of endorsement, the writer must choose between the options of endorsement or disendorsement, and ultimately, this puts a strain on reade-writer solidarity by framing the proposition and the text as a whole towards a particular point-of-view.
The function of intertextual dialogism in framing
Writers negotiate the arguability of their utterances in a text by presenting the proposition as either extra-vocalized information (information which has been attributed to another) or as bare assertion (information which has not been attributed and which must therefore belong to the writer).
When a writer chooses to use another to represent information (i.e. a quoted source), he or she must represent that information as either truthful and valid or as problematic. The differences between using
said versus
show versus
claim therefore become more than just a choice of verb; they
affect dialogic positioning. Thus, for example, the verb word
show presupposes the truth validity of the proposition in question while
claim does the opposite (White 1994, 2006). The implications affect whether the proposition is being represented as dialogistically expansive or contractive - as whether they are open or closed to further interpretation and to alternative dialogic positions.
White (2006) and Miller (2004) suggest that there are a number of factors which determine the dialogistic positioning of extra-vocalised information including, but not limited to, the degree of authority indicated by the source and the degree to which the writer endorses (or disendorses) the attributed material. Thus, once a proposition has been observed as Attributed (either acknowledged or
distance), it may be further divided into a proposition which is represented as
dialogically expansive (open) or dialogically contractive (closed). The
categories of dialogically contractive propositions are Proclaim: Pronounce,
Concur, Endorse and Disclaim: Deny, Counter, while those of the dialogically expansive or open type are Entertain: Evidence, Likelihood, Hearsay, and
Attribute: Acknowledge and Distance. Neutrality is maintained through the use of the attributed reporting words
said or
told.
Graduation - Using rhetoric to focus and force information
The system of Graduation is concerned with locating values in language that scale other meanings (Attitude or Engagement) either by "locating them on a scale of high to low intensity or from core to marginal membership of a category" (White 1998:25) across the Appraisal system. Graduation is concerned with a wide array of lexical and some grammatical resources, with the most prominent being adverbs, nouns and verbs. These lexical and grammatical resources are then scaled along two parameters: Focus and Force. Each will be discussed below.
Scaling: Focus and Force
The virtues of Focus scale other meanings in terms of the softness or sharpness of the relationship represented by the item (White 2007a:31). At the soft end,
values are exemplified by hedges or vague language indicating incompleteness: "sort of," "all this stuff," "kind of nerve-wracking," etc. (Eggins and Slade 1997:137, White 2007a:31). At the sharp end of the Focus scales, values of Graduation are represented by core terms which are sharply focused: "true friend," "pure evil," "hooded thugs" etc. (White 2007a:31). Under
Focus, scaling operates in contexts that are not gradable in any concrete way.
Instead, it is concerned more with a sense that some values in the semantic
Focus have been either softened or sharpened through the process of
broadening or narrowing.
By raising or lowering the intensity of the semantic categories, the values of
Force contrast with those of Focus. Under Force, grading operates with little problem since it is specifically concerned with values which express different degrees of some core meaning (White 2007a). Typically, values of force
are realized by adverbials, adjectives, verbs or modals. Force is therefore either implicit (
adore versus
love versus
like) or explicit (
slightly, somewhat, really) (White 2007a:32). Implicit values of Force
operate across Appraisal categories and are not confined to the system of
Graduation. Explicit values of Force, on the other hand, can and do operate within the system of Graduation and are divided into Graders and Amplifiers.
Issues in intensity - grading versus amplification
White (1998, 2007a) divides scales of Force into two broader categories:
Graders and Amplifiers. Graders are lexical items such as adverbs and adjectives which specify degrees of intensity from high to low, e.g.
completely satisfied,
very satisfied,
slight fall,
severe fall, etc. (White 1998:26-27). Graders are also realized through items of
Measure, resources for grading extent or number. Measure is realized both interpersonally and experientially. Interpersonally, Measure is the application of intensity to some mode of counting where the writer's subjectivity is at stake. Experientially, counting is typically realized as a numerative with the noun group thereby having an objective status to some external reality. Thus, the experiential "fourteen protesters screaming" is interpersonalised as "lots of
protesters screaming" (White 1998; White 2007a). The broad category of
Amplifier is different from those of Grader primarily in that Amplifiers specify solely for maximum degrees of intensity. Amplifiers may be subcategorized along two separate axes: isolating versus fused and experientialised
versus interpersonalised.
Isolating Amplifiers are typically realized in one of two ways: colour (
bloody awful day) and repetition (
he laughed and laughed and laughed) (White 1998; 2007a). Isolating Amplifiers are typically realized by individual lexical items with the sole purpose of raising or lowering intensity. fused Amplifiers are such since they do two things at once: they specify some degree of intensity at the same time as they code a separate semantic value (White 1998:27). There are five major categories of fused Amplifiers: Metaphor (prices
skyrocketed), Quality ( the car
veered off the road); Evaluatory
(
desperate bid); Universalise (
the talks went on endlessly); and
Measure Plus (
minuscule, huge, gargantuan) (White 1998, 2007a).
fused Amplifiers are then further subdivided into those which are interpersonalised or those which are experientialised. Accordingly, fused
Amplifiers of Metaphor and Quality belong to the experientialise subcategory since both Metaphor and Quality amplifiers exhibit material processes (White 1998:29). The remaining three: Evaluatory (intensity entailed by appraisal value), Universalise (intensity entailed by measure or usuality) and Measure
Plus (intensity fused with measure) are all examples of the subcategory of
interpersonalise fused amplifiers.
Description of methodology and outline of results
Two days were spent searching for appropriate texts for analysis. The two chosen were based on the following criteria: word count, topic, hard news format, date of publication relevant to topic (No earlier than March 19, no later than March 20) and country of printing (American vs Canadian, vs International paper). The texts under consideration appear in the body of this paper. Each
has been divided into numbered clauses. Each of the texts was analysed
using AT systems of Attitude, Engagement and Graduation. The analysis was done on a clause-by-clause basis. First, the texts were divided into clause
complexes, then each clause was individually analysed for delicacy. The
findings have been tabulated below in the form following Miller (2004).
After an examination of each text from the position of AT, a comparative on the topic of framing is presented; however, as space limits preclude the possibility of an in-depth analysis of all clauses, global results have been provided in sections 5.0.1 and 5.0.2 below.
Global results for text one "Bush marks Iraq date, omits using `war'
word,"
by Nedra Pickler, Associated Press, published in the Boston Globe and
boston.com March 20, 2006, with the description based on Miller
(2004):
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Total number of clause complexes: 24 Appraisal: Attitude Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing instances of the system: Total number of instances of Attitude: Judgment = 16 (see:1, 2, 3, 4, 6, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 18, 22, 23) Appreciation = 12 (see: 2, 4, 7, 8, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 19, 20, 21, 24) Affect = 0 From the perspective of delicacy and subsystem Judgment Inscribed: Judgment = 0 Implicit: Judgment = 16 Social Esteem = 9 Social Sanction = 7
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Total number of cases of implicit Judgment either provoked or evoked: Total number of instances of: Provoked: Social Sanction = 4 Evoked: Social Sanction = 3 Total number of instances of Provoked: Social Esteem = 8 Examples of positive provoked: Social Esteem = 6 Examples of negative provoked: Social Esteem = 2 Examples of evoked social Esteem = 1 From the perspective of delicacy and subsystem Appreciation Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing attitude: appreciation: 12 Specifically: Reaction: 5 (see: 2, 4, 19, 20, 21) Composition: 7 (see: 7, 8, 11, 12, 15, 16, 24) Valuation: 0
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From the perspective of delicacy and the subsystem Affect: 0 Total number showing authorial affect = 0
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Total number showing non-authorial affect = 0
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Appraisal: Engagement: Attribution and Dialogical Positioning Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing attribution: 10
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Specifically: Endorsed: 2 (see 11, 13) Neutral: 7 (see: 4,6, 7, 9, 10, 12, 18, ) Disendorsed 1 (see 8)
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Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing
extra-vocalisation/dialogism Specifically: Contraction: 4 (see:4, 7, 11, 13) Expansion: 8 (see: 4, 6, 8, 9, 10, 12, 18) Specifically: Contraction: Proclaim: Pronounce = 1 (see 4) Contraction: Proclaim: Concur = 0 Contraction: Proclaim: Endorse = 1 (see 13) Contraction: Disclaim: Counter = 1 (see 11) Contraction: Disclaim: Deny = 1 (see 7)
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From the perspective of Expansion, specifically = 8 Expansion: Entertain: Evidence = 0 Expansion: Entertain: Likelihood = 0 Expansion: Entertain: Hearsay = 1 (see 6) Expansion: Attribute: Acknowledge= 6 (see 4, 6, 9, 10, 12, 18) Expansion: Attribute: Distance = 1 (see 8)
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Number of Clauses showing Bare Assertions: 14 (see: 1, 2, 3, 5,
14, 15,16, 17, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24)
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Appraisal: Graduation
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Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing the system of
graduation: 24
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Total instances of Force: 20 ( see:2, 4, 7,8, 12, 13, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23) Total instances of Focus: 4 (see: 7, 13, 20, 24)
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Delicate Breakdown of Force in clause complexes: Specifically: Solitary examples of Force = 3 Force: Graders = 2 (see 7, 13) Force: Repeat = 1 (see 22) Force: Colour = 0
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Specifically: Fused examples of Force in Clause complexes: 17 Fused: experientialise: Measure = 12 (see: 8,14, 15, 16,
17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23) Fused: experientialise: Metaphor = 2 (see: 2, 12) Fused: experientialise: Quality = 1 (see: 10)
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Fused: interpersonalise: Measure-Plus = 0 Fused: interpersonalise: Evaluatory = 2 (see: 4, 11) Fused: interpersonalise: Universalise = 0
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Delicate breakdown of Focus: 0 Instances of focus: soften : 0 Instances of Focus: sharpen: 0
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Global results for text two: "As Iraq War Heads Into 4 Year, Bush Pledges `Complete Victory,"' by Guy Gugliotta, Washington Post, and washingtonpost.com March 19, 2006, with the description based on Miller
(2004):
Total number of clause complexes: 18
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Appraisal: Attitude
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Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing instances of the system: 12 Total number of instances of Attitude: Judgment = 7 (see: 4. 6, 8, 11, 16, 17); Appreciation = 9 (see: 5, 7, 8, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 18) Affect = 0 From the perspective of delicacy and subsystem Judgment Inscribed: Judgment = 2 (see: 17) Implicit: Judgment = 5 (see: 4, 6, 8, 11, 16) Social Esteem = 6 (see: 4, 6, 8, 11, 16) Social Sanction = 1 (see: 17)
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Total number of cases of Inscribed: Judgment Social Esteem = 0 Social Sanction= 1 (see: 17) Total number of cases of implicit Judgment either
provoked or evoked: 5 Total number of instances of: Provoked: Social
Sanction = 1 (see: 16) Evoked: Social Sanction = 0 Total number of instances of Provoked: Social Esteem = 3 (see: 6, 8, 11) Examples of positive provoked: Social Esteem = 0 Examples of negative provoked: Social Esteem = 3 (see: 6, 8, 11)
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From the perspective of delicacy and subsystem Appreciation Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing attitude: appreciation: 7 Specifically: Reaction: 1 (see: 13) Composition: 4 (see: 8, 11, 12, 15) Valuation: 2 (see: 14, 18)
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From the perspective of delicacy and the subsystem Affect: 0 Total number showing authorial affect = 0 Total number showing non-authorial affect = 0
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Appraisal: Engagement: Attribution and Dialogical Positioning Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing attribution: 17 (see: 1, 2, 3, 4,5,6, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18)
*note: 10 & 12 show only partial attribution; they are intravocalised in nature Specifically: Endorsed: 7 (see: 1, 2, 8, 9, 11, 12, 15) Neutral: 9 (see: 3, 4, 5, 6, 13, 14, 16, 17, 18) Disendorsed 1 (see: 10)
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Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing
extra-vocalisation/dialogism Specifically: Contraction: 11 (see: 2, 3, 5, 6, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18) Expansion: 6 (see: 1, 4, 8, 9, 10, 11) Specifically: Contraction: Proclaim: Pronounce = 8 (see:2, 3, 5, 6, 13,
14, 16, 17, 18) Contraction: Proclaim: Concur = 0 Contraction: Proclaim: Endorse = 0 Contraction: Disclaim: Counter = 0 Contraction: Disclaim: Deny = 0
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From the perspective of Expansion, specifically = 6 Expansion: Entertain: Evidence = 1 (see: 11) Expansion: Entertain: Likelihood = 1 (see: 4) Expansion: Entertain: Hearsay = 0 Expansion: Attribute: Acknowledge = 3 (see: 1, 8, 9) Expansion: Attribute: Distance = 1 (see: 10)
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Number of Clauses showing Bare Assertions: 3 (see: 7, 10, 12)
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Appraisal: Graduation
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Total number of clause complexes showing the system of graduation:
11(see: 1,2, 8, 9, 10,12, 13, 14, 15, 17, 18)
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Total instances of Force: 8 (see: 8, 9, 10, 13, 14, 15, 17, 18) Total instances of Focus: 3 (see: 1, 2, 12)
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Delicate Breakdown of Force in clause complexes: Specifically: Solitary examples of Force = 4 Force: Graders = 4 (see: 9, 10, 18) Force: Repeat = 0 Force: Colour = 0
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Specifically: Fused examples of Force in Clause complexes: 8 Fused: experientialise: Measure = 2 (see: 8, 9) Fused: experientialise: Metaphor = 2 (see: 12, 14) Fused: experientialise: Quality = 0
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Fused: interpersonalise: Measure-Plus = 0 Fused: interpersonalise: Evaluatory = 3 (see: 13, 14, 17) Fused: interpersonalise: Universalise = 1 (see: 15)
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Delicate breakdown of Focus: Instances of focus: soften: 1 (see: 12) Instances of Focus: sharpen: 3 (see: 1, 2, 18)
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Text One (566 words)
By Nedra Picker, Associated Press, boston.com.
March 19, 2006
http://www.boston.com/news/world/middleeast/articles/2006/03/20/bush_marks_Iraq_dat...
Retrieved March 27, 2006 and checked September 29, 2007.
- Bush marks Iraq date, omits using `war' word
- Washington - President Bush marked the anniversary of the Iraq war
yesterday by touting the efforts to build democracy there and avoiding
mention of the daily violence that has raged, three years after he
ordered an invasion.
- The president did not use the word "war."
- "We are implementing a strategy that will
lead to victory in Iraq," the president said to a public that is
increasingly sceptical that he has a plan to end the fighting after the
deaths of more than 2,300 US troops.
- Antiwar protests were held throughout the country over the weekend,
including a rally in Washington.
- Bush said he spoke with US Ambassador to Iraq Zalmay Khalilzad, who said
progress was being made by Iraqi leader to form a government.
- Earlier yesterday, former Iraqi prime minister Ayad Allawi said his
country was in the midst of a civil war.
- Over the weekend, several administration officials repeated the theme
that progress continues toward building a unified Iraqi government and
nation.
- "Now is the time for resolve, not retreat," Defense Secretary Donald
H. Rumsfeld wrote in a column for The Washington Post.
- "Turing our backs on postwar Iraq today would be the modern equivalent
of handing postwar Germany back to the Nazis."
- Yet there were acknowledgments from the top commander of US forces in
Iraq that the situation is fragile and that he did not predict the
strength of the insurgency.
- "I did not think it would be as robust as it has been," General George
W. Casey said on NBC's "Meet the Press."
- "And," he added "it's something that, obviously, with my time here on
the ground, my thinking on that has gained much greater clarity and
insight."
- The third anniversary of the US-led war in Iraq drew tens of thousands
of protesters around the globe, from hurricane-ravaged Louisiana to
Australia.
- About 200 war veterans, hurricane survivors, and demonstrators gathered
yesterday at the national cemetery in Chalmette, La., to protest how
the military conflict overseas had hurt the country's ability to help
the Gulf Coast recover from last year's hurricanes.
- About 200 joined a march yesterday down Fifth Avenue in New York.
- One slogan was: "We the People Need to do More to End the War."
- Seventeen people were arrested for disorderly conduct, police said.
- A rally Saturday in Times Square drew more than 1,000.
- More than 7,000 people marched through Chicago on Saturday.
- Others marched in Boston, in San Francisco, and in Pittsburgh.
- Antiwar rallies in Japan yesterday drew about 800 protesters chanting
"No war! Stop the war!" and banging drums as they marched through
Tokyo toward the US Embassy.
- A day earlier, about 2,000 rallied in the city.
- Protesters also gathered outside the US Embassy in Malaysia, and at
least 1,000 people turned out in Seoul, which has the third-largest
contingent of foreign troops in Iraq after the United States and
Britain.
Discussion of findings - remarks on Attitude and Engagement
According to White (1998, 2007), strictly
objective media texts are constructed through the elimination of any
authorial input whatsoever. Nevertheless, White also (1998, 2007a,
2007b) recognizes that although the only true measure of subjective
authorial insertion is through the use of personal pronouns, implicit
subjective markers can be inserted through the use of specific words
and evaluations of circumstances
2 that would not necessarily be
considered examples of purely objective reporting but that do not make
it an entirely subjective text either.
Pickler's text reveals not only implicit
authorial input through the use of
bare
assertions but also strategic use of frame
development and strategic placement of attributed material. Thus,
although the article is represented as an objective text --there
are no markers of explicit authorial insertion through personal pronoun
usage and no explicit linguistic evidence of the author's value
judgments - the article does have a strong underlining implicit
subjective aspect. Hence, it is an example of how press journalists can
combine both subjective and objective representation of an event
spinning it in order to break down the current existing frame -
here, the "Fairy Tale Just War" - to build up and develop a
distinct anti-war frame through the strategic use of attribution and
attributed proposition, evaluative language, and repetition of
numbers.
Attitudinal and Intertextual Positioning within the text
An analysis of
Attitudinal
and
Intertextual
positioning reveals the following patterns: the article commences by
presenting the accepted narrative hard-news frame of objective news
reporting, beginning with a lead and developing the story of Bush's
address to the nation on the third anniversary of the war in Iraq.
However, the use of strategically placed evaluative language such as
"invasion,"
3:
provoked: social sanction rather
than "war" in reference to America's role in Iraq, as well as
"touting" (see: 2) and "marked" (see: 2) to represent Bush's speech
serve to position Pickler's ideological perspective on America's
involvement in Iraq as other than entirely supportive. Further, use of
propositions by sources such as Ayad Allawi
4 but with an
underlining message that disclaims Ambassador Khalilzad's statement
that democratic progress is being made. and
General George W. Casey's acknowledge that the situation in Iraq is
"fragile"
5 as well as Dialogism: Contraction:
Disclaim: Counter and volatile
(see: 11-13) In combination, the strategies present Pickler's
anti-war perspective. implicitly, but the message is quite clear
through specific evaluative markers and high degrees of
bare assertion
using numbers as markers of force.
Attitudinally, the examples are almost equally
divided between the subsystems of
Judgment: Provoked
6 and
Judgment:
evoked and examples of
Appreciation:
Composition
and Appreciation:
Reaction respectfully.
Judgment:
Provoked
and
Evoked
7 and
Appreciation:
Composition
8and
Reaction
9 Examples of
Judgment
have for the most part the negative evaluative target of Bush and/or US
occupation.
The use of
Attitude:
Appreciation to evaluate the function and
process of the peace rallies and/or the situation in Iraq make up the
remaining examples of
Attitudinal
evaluation. Appreciation:
Reaction (see: 4) reflects the public's
growing scepticism of Bush's plan in Iraq.
Appreciation:
Composition is used once (see 8
Appreciation:
positive: composition:
Progress) in an extra-vocalised
attributed assimilated disendorsed statement by unnamed administration
officials quoted as repeating
"the
theme that progress continues toward building a unified Iraqi
government and nation," once, to
explicitly Disclaim:
Deny the positive state of affairs in Iraq
(through the process of Expansion:
Attribute: Acknowledge
10 and
twice
11and 12: Appreciation: composition: negative:
robust to evaluate the strength of the
insurgency. The remaining examples of
Appreciation:
Composition
reflect the positive participation and resolve of anti-war protestors
and marches which extend across the US and outside of the US in
Malaysia and Seoul (see 14- 24).
Bare assertions versus sourcing, status and textual integration
According to White (1998), the challenge for
the media is to present one version of a story through the use of
"selective heteroglossia" without putting solidarity at risk.
Obviously, ideological, political and socio-economic factors affect
the way news is delivered by the press. More precisely, the media often
models the ideal ideological and political perspectives represented by
people in power; and, for the most part, it is always in the media's
best interest to present war as a set of oppositions: the good and the
bad, the villain and the victim, the people and the state. Presented in
this way, the reality of any situation is easier to handle, and far
more acceptable to readers. However, all is not always
black-and-white, and the news, although "reliable," may in fact
be biased.
Choosing Bare Assertions over Heteroglossia: what it means to the reader in issues of solidarity
There are direct rhetorical implications to
choosing bare assertions (monoglossia) over heteroglossia in any
discourse the main implication being solidarity. Solidarity as defined
by White (1998) has more to do with the relationship that is maintained
by the writer and the reader than with the necessity of the writer and
reader agreeing on point of view. As White notes, negotiations of
solidarity must leave room for the act of negotiating. This means that
although a reader and writer may not see eye-to-eye on an issue, if
a degree of empathy or sympathy for a cause can be maintained, then
solidarity may still be salvaged (White 1998). Solidarity is always at
risk when a writer presents a proposition in an unattributed form: the
Bare
Assertion.
Of the 24 clause complexes in Pickler's text,
14
12 are Bare Assertions,
eight
13 have been attritubuted to some higher
source power such as President Bush, Former Iraqi President Allawi,
Defence Secretary Donald Rumsfeld and one (see: 8) has been categorized
as medium (on a hierarchy of high, medium, and low) and is attributed
to various unnamed White House Administration Officials. From the
position of textual insertion, five of the propositions are direct
quotes
14 and
the remainder have been assimilated. That Pickler has chosen to present
most of the propositions in her text as a
Bare
Assertion is important, since the
presentation of any information in the form of a
Bare
Assertion always has consequence.
For White (2007b), bare assertions are not
simply facts to be ignored. Rather,
bare
assertions serve a particular rhetorical
function as either examples of power or solidarity. Often, these
evaluations are in the form of subjective observations of either the
mental states of participants not directly involved in the text or of
the physical surroundings of the geographic areas that the subject is
occurring in. In either case, power monoglosses put at risk the
writer/reader relationship, as these monoglosses tend to assume a
certain degree of generality. Solidarity bare assertions are
propositions represented as common knowledge.
Graduation: using numbers to propel the message for-ward
In this text, graduation is used to
dramatically draw the reader's attention towards the events of March
20, 2006 by using implicit and explicit examples of fused amplifiers
and solitary graders to guide the reader towards taking a stand against
the war, and more importantly, to outline America's growing antagonism
towards its role in Iraq. Numbers, repetition and movement across
geographical space are the keys means of achieving this goal.
Explicit repetition occurs when a lexical term
or terms is repeated with the effect of drawing the reader's attention
to some concept or idea. In this text, examples of explicit repetition
force: solitary:
grade are few; however, Pickler does begin
the article by purposefully drawing the reader's attention to what
Bush's speech does not do - it omits reference to the word `war'
- and as she repeats this proposition explicitly in clause complex
3, implicitly in clause complex 2, and again in clause complex 7
through attribution and classification of "civil war," Pickler's
negative appreciation of Bush's war becomes obvious. The use of partial
reiteration through substitution is important and occurs in clause
complex 2 through the use of the term "invasion," which draws the
reader's attention once again to Pickler's anti-war stance and
position. Rhetorically, "invasion" may be graded as rhetorically and
attitudinally more negative than the term war, as war implies two
parties and can be romanticized as in the notion of `just wars';
however, invasion implies forced entry, hostile takeovers and
brutality. The stark negative stance that Pickler takes on Bush's role
in Iraq is amplified by the bare assertion in clause complex 3: "The
President did not use the word "war [.]"" Not only does the
repetition implicitly evaluate the honesty of the President, but also
the proposition in clause complex 4 - anticipated and alluded to
through the use of a bare assertion in clause complex 3 - explicitly
classifies the public that Bush is addressing in his speech as
"increasingly sceptical," thereby using clause complex 3 to position
the upcoming "America against the State" frame.
In fact, Pickler refers explicitly to Bush's
role in Iraq only once
15 but in doing so, she
strategically creates an anti - `just war' frame by inundating the
reader with numbers. Quantification is used throughout the article as a
means of implicit and explicit force. Martin and White (2005) and White
(1998, 2007a) assert that, although intensification can occur through
the use of explicit graders such as `very,' implicit graduation of
non-attitudinal lexis can also occur. Thus, in clause complex 8, the
quantifier "several" is used to draw the reader's attention to the
"administration officials," who are repeating the theme "that
progress continues toward building a unified Iraqi government and
nation," and thereby furthering the divide between the
truth-validity of the source - Bush himself - and Pickler's
spin. The problem here stems from the ideology underlining the message
of negative truth veracity implied through the use of "several
administration officials
repeat[ing] the theme..." as
repetition of a general idea; this seems to imply spinning of that
idea. Further, although she makes reference to the extravocalised
source, she disendorses herself from the proposition through the use of
"repeated the theme," implying to a degree that she neither supports
the truth validity of the proposition nor the nature with which it was
intended.
Further, the inclusion of a specific number to
a situation, such as anti-war rallies, can be interpreted as offering
an attitudinal evaluation of sorts. In the case of Pickler's text,
numeration is used extensively to propel the message and the reader
forward towards some negative judgment about America's and specifically
Bush's role in Iraq. The quantity of the sources provided from clause
complex 13 onward offers not only a degree of truth validity to the
overall frame that this is not a fairy tale just war that Pickler is
creating, but also to the unstated yet clear ideological position that
Pickler is adopting. Numeration thus results in grading the phenomenon
as amount and, to some degree as extent (White and Martin 2005), and it
plays an important role in the text particularly from the position of
amplification. In fact, quantification through numeration becomes the
central means of focusing the reader's attention on Bush's growing
skeptical public and the anti-war movement itself. From clause
complex 13 onwards, Pickler uses numbers to evaluate, from the position
of either
judgment
or
appreciation,
the circumstances surround the third anniversary of the US-led war
(clause complex 14). Further, she presents the data cumulatively
through repetition of numbers (see "200" repeated in clause complexes
15 and 16) that become progressively larger
16 and geographically vast moving
from the US to Asia. Thus, through the resources of
graduation:
Force,
Pickler has succeeded in breaking down the frame of "America as Hero"
and installing the frame of "People against the State". This is
important, as it represents an ever-growing ideology - one which
was not as prevalent, or at least not as published, at the beginning of
the war.
Text Two (455 words)
By Guy Gugliotta,
Washington Post, March 19, 2006
http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/03/18/AR200603
1801256_...
Retrieved March 27, 2006 and checked September 29, 2007.
- As Iraq War Heads Into 4
year, Bush Pledges `Complete Victory'
- On the eve of the third anniversary of the Iraq invasion, President Bush
yesterday promised to "finish the mission" with "complete victory,"
urging the American public to remain steadfast but offering no
indication when victory may be achieved.
- "More fighting and sacrifice will be required," Bush said in his
weekly radio address.
- "For some, the temptation to retreat and abandon our commitments is
strong.
- Yet there is no peace, there's no honour, and there's no security in
retreat.
- So America will not abandon Iraq to the terrorists who want to attack us
again."
- Bush's address comes at a time when confidence in the administration's
Iraq strategy appears to have reached a new low.
- A Washington Post-ABC News poll this month found that 65 percent of
Americans think that Bush has no plan for victory, while 35 percent
- the lowest ever recorded by the poll - think he does.
- A White House fact sheet on Iraq noted that casualties from the devices
have been halved in the past 18 months and that nearly half of the
devices are being found and disabled before they can be detonated.
- The fact sheet also buttressed the president's assertion last week that
Iraqi security forces are assuming greater battlefield responsibility.
- Democrats noted last week, however, that a recent Pentagon report said
the number of "Level 1" Iraqi units capable of operating
independently of the United States had dropped from one to zero.
- For the most part, the fact sheet ignored the missteps and false starts
that have dogged the war since the invasion on March 19, 2003, and
instead contrasted Iraq under Saddam Hussein with Iraq today.
- Three years ago, the fact sheet said, "life in Iraq was marked by
brutality, fear and terror," and Iraqis "had no voice in their
country or their lives."
- Today, it said, "the reign of terror has been replaced by a
democratically elected government."
- In his address, Bush noted that sectarian violence plagues Iraq, but he
urged Iraqis to "reach across political, religious and sectarian
lines," to convert December's democratic elections into a "government
that can confront the terrorist threat and earn the trust and
confidence of all Iraqis."
- "These past three years have tested our resolve," he said.
- The enemy has proved brutal and relentless...and our troops have
shown magnificent courage and tremendous sacrifices" which, along with
Iraqi sacrifices, had given Iraq a "historic opportunity" to rebuild
itself.
- "The security of our country is directly linked to the liberty of the
Iraqi people," Bush said, "and we will settle for nothing less than
complete victory."
Discussion of findings: Attitude, Engagement and Graduation
The text opens with a rhetorically powerful
headline that not only sets the stage for the entire article but also
frames it within the two voices of the text: Bush and the writer. The
use of "pledges" in the headline is the first example of implicit
subjectivity in the 18 clause complexes making up the article. The
theme throughout will be to elaborate on the notion of "complete
victory," using the phrase to ideologically frame the major conquests
gained by Americans in Iraq in the last three years, and to highlight
the expectations of Americans in the future. It will also be the means
of maintaining solidarity and creating unity with the reader through
the use of specific markers of graduation: force and focus, attitude:
Judgment: social esteem and strategic use of dialogic positioning.
Framing through Attitude and Engagement
Clause complex 1 "As Iraq War Heads Into
4
Year, Bush Pledges `Complete Victory"' has no markings of
Attitude
but the use of explicit graduation:
focus: sharpen in `Complete Victory'
coupled with the insertion of what appears to be an authorial use of
the implicit high intensity verb `pledges' sets the tone of the entire
article. Clause complex 2 like 1 has no explicit marking of Attitude.
However, as in 1, there appears to be an authorial inclusion in the
form of `urging the American public to remain steadfast but offering no
indication when victory may be achieved.' We may interpret this to be
Negative: Judgment: Social Esteem:
Capacity/Tenacity where what is at stake is
Bush's ability to follow through with the `complete victory' pledged in
clause complex 1. The clause itself is therefore more likely
categorized as an instance of both extra and intra-vocalisation,
where extra-vocalisation is apparent clearly through the partially
assimilated proclamation made by President Bush, while
intra-vocalisation appears near the end of the clause as a form of
assessment, one where the ability of the President to follow through is
questioned. This affects solidarity in that those readers who agree
with the assessment will read on; on the other hand, the other two
effects of the question are to create irony (picked up by the
subsequent reference to sacrifice and `minor' failure) and to question
the meaning of the term. Hence, those with a vested interest in
`complete victory' may not appreciate Gugliotta's authorial insertion
and the recognition of this fact.
It is through clause complex 3 - "More
fighting and sacrifice will be required..." - that Gugliotta
begins framing the main claim of the text: victory will necessitate
sacrifice. What is being presented, therefore, is an example of
Attitude: Judgment:
Evoked:
Tenacity,
where the target of evaluation becomes the American people who are not,
at this point, being offered an opportunity to open the proposition to
further consideration or discussion. By presenting the clause complex
in the form of engagement:
contractive:
proclamation,
Bush is presenting a situation which, if the American people want to
win, they must follow through on. The use of high intensity implicit
graduation
through the modal verb phrase "will be required" further stresses
this obligation.
To further the ideological goal of the text, clause complexes 3, 4, 5,
and 6 offer examples of carefully constructed links between ideology
and framing and specifically, the role of America in attaining Bush's
ultimate goal - complete victory:
-
(3) "More fighting and sacrifice will be required," Bush said in his weekly radio address.
-
(4) "For some, the temptation to retreat and abandon our commitments is
strong.
-
(5) Yet there is no peace, there's no honour, and there's no security in
retreat.
-
(6) So America will not abandon Iraq to the terrorists who want to
attack us again."
In each, the following patterns are obvious:
from the perspective of
Engagement:
Attribution
all of the propositions are framed as neutrally attributed meaning that
Gugliotta neither entirely endorses nor disagrees with the truth
validity of the propositions. From the position of
Engagement:
Dialogism, the four clause complexes are
presented as contractually closed to further discussion in the form of
pronouncements and yet, they are addressed to the American people as a
type of appeal. Solidarity is constructed through the use of `our' in
clause complex 4 and `us' in clause complex six. This inclusion is not
only important, but also deliberate, since it enhances the message of
the necessary and honourable course of action presented in complexes 4
and 5. Clause complexes 4 and 5 share the pattern of no specific
graduation
markers; however, the implicit intensity illustrated through the
repetition of "retreat" in both clauses, first as a temptation and
abandonment and then as an elaboration through isocolon gradiatio where
"retreat" represents a lack of peace, honour and security, require
examination. Clause complex 4 is an example of
Expansion in the form of
Entertain:
Likelihood
with a high degree of negative
evoked
judgment:
social
esteem:
tenacity:
resolve, where the targets are those who
wish to abandon America's efforts of victory. Again, the inclusion of
this recognition in the piece is rhetorically important particularly
when dialogically contracted against clause complex 5
(Contraction: Proclaim:
Pronounce) which implicitly criticizes the
act of retreat in the form of
Appreciation: negative:
valuation by assigning it negative value
and aiming it at the target audience of those who do not support
America's war effort. It becomes an ideological conflict between `us,'
the supporters of the war effort, and `them,' the protestors. Clause
complex 6 becomes a very important proclamation when through the use of
high intensity modalisation: obligation/probability and
provoked:
Judgment:
Social
Esteem:
Tenacity
he makes very clear his position on the war of terror and therefore
announces his plan, not only for himself and his country, but also for
the integrity and tenacity of the American people as a whole.
Breaking down the Fairy Tale Just War frame through attribution and sourcing and dialogism
Unlike Pickler, Gugliotta presents only three
propositions in the form of a bare
assertion (see: 7, 10, 12), and each works
to further the theme "unstable administration" - which is based
to a degree on the premise that in a `just war' everyone is on the same
side. The importance of the bare
assertion in clause complex 7 is
highlighted through the interpretation of the material presented in the
Fact Sheet and used by Bush as the basis of his pledge to `complete
victory.' Clause complexes 10 and 12 interpret the information in the
Fact Sheet, thereby putting it in direct conflict with clause complexes
11, 13, and 14, each of which is rhetorically significant and worthy of
examination:
-
(11) Democrats noted last week, however, that a recent Pentagon report
said the number of "Level 1" Iraqi units capable of operating
independently of the United States had dropped from one to zero."
-
(13) Three years ago, the fact sheet said, "life in Iraq was marked by
brutality, fear, and terror" and Iraqis "had no voice in their
country or their lives."
-
(14) Today, it said, "the reign of terror has been replaced by a
democratically elected government."
To begin, neither of these clauses attempt to
discuss the nature of the situation in Iraq nor to make any reference
to the widely rumoured `civil war' occurring. Clause complex 12, points
to the major fault of the fact sheet used by Bush as the basis of his
`complete victory' speech. Although not a
bare
assertion in the true meaning of the term,
it nevertheless has implications of intra-vocalisation, namely
through the use of interpretation. The high level instances of
evaluative language through "dogged" and "invasion" in clause
complex 12 serve to classify America's role in Iraq as less just and
more tyrannical in nature. The weak simple comparison in clause complex
14 presents another dilemma: the notion that simply replacing
governments can eradicate fear is not only ridiculous but also
hypocritical, since clause complex 11 maintains that "Iraqi units
capable of operating independently of the United States had dropped
from one to zero," and thus the situation appears less stable than it
was in the recent past. Clause complex 13
17 is strategic attribution since
although it is a proclamation
18, the main function of clause
complex 13 is to highlight the
expansive
extra-vocalised
proposition of 14, namely that "the reign of terror has been replaced
by a democratically elected government." Ideologically, the
proposition presents a pro-Western notion that once an oppressive
government has toppled everything must just naturally fall into place.
From the position of solidarity, clause complex 14 can put at risk the
relationship fostered in the earlier half of the text and developed in
the later half. Essentially, the problems lie in the information
presented as clause complex 13 speaks of a quality of life while 14
introduces information of a political and possibly ideological change.
Neither, however, mentions the civil war, escalating violence and
continued US deaths and so each appears to have been solely employed
for the purposes of ideological enhancement.
Clause complexes 15-18 take the reader
through the last cycle of the text. Each is presented as
Contractive: Proclaim:
Pronouncement and this is significant
because at the end, Bush leaves no room for discussion. Clause complex
15 is dialogically significant and rhetorically important since it is
the first time that sectarian violence in Iraq is addressed. From the
position of attribution, the propositions in 15 are both endorsed.
Attitudinally, the clause complex is an example of
Appreciation:
Composition:
Balance: Negative:
Discordant where what is being evaluated is
Iraq as a country. From the position of voicing, the proposition is
problematic. Presented as
Engagement: Contractive: Disclaim:
Counter it is at once a message to the
American people as well as the Iraqis. Clause complexes 16 - 18 are
in the most basic of terms an appeal to Bush's U.S. citizens.
Positive
Provoked: Judgment: Social Esteem:
Tenacity: Resolve is used to reiterate the
need to US commitment, heroism, and bravery. Also important to note is
the use of personal pronouns as an obvious strategy to maintain
reader/speaker - writer alignment and thus: "our resolve" (16),
"our troops," (17) "our country". These are contrasted with
reference to "Iraqi sacrifices," (17) and "Iraqi people" who are
intended to be seen as part of the group, but who do not fall within
the full realm of "our" since the "it" is the security of the US
which is directly linked to the "liberty of the Iraqi people". This,
in short, is the future dilemma for the war on terrorism, since as
Gugliotta notes, quoting Bush, "nothing less than complete victory"
will do.
Remarks on graduation patterns of force and focus
In this text,
graduation
is used to draw the reader's attention to the current situation in Iraq
through intensity markers of both the implicit and explicit type.
Beginning with clause complex 1 and continuing to 3
graduation
sets the tone, namely attaining "complete
victory"
19 through the use of the explicit
marker of "complete" and an implicit high intensity marker of
extra-vocalisation located in the verb "promised" which sets the
rhetorical aspect of the text and introduces Bush's requirement of more
fighting and sacrifice from the American troops. Rhetorically, the text
is at once a pledge of victory to the American people and a call to
arms as well.
In both cases,
graduation
is used to focus the reader's attention to the underlining message of
discontent that Bush is attempting to play down but which Gugliotta
makes reference to in clause complexes 7 and 8 through low intensity
use of scaling with "appears to have reached," (see: 7) and then
specific mention through "lowest ever."
20 Here, what is important is the
gradual shift in meaning. In clause complex 7, the use of "appears"
is strategic from a solidarity aspect since the use of "appears" is
very different from an assertion such as "it did reach" or "it
obviously reached," where the rhetorical implications would put the
writer/reader relationship at risk. Clause complex 8 moves from the
indecisive "appears" to a quantification of numerical type. The use
of numbers - "65 percent" and then later "35 percent" offer
information and aspects of authorial inclusion which introduces a
subjective reading of the situation into the text; the further use of
"lowest ever"
21 enhances Gugliotta's implicit assessment of Bush's plan by highlighting
the negative composition of it through the use of measure to illustrate
possible discontent.
The resources of
graduation
are used tactically to inform the audience
of not only the plan Bush has created or is creating but also the
information set out in a White House fact sheet on Iraq. Clause complex
12 uses
focus
and
force
advantageously. Focus:
Soften "For the most part" inserts
Gugliotta into the text as the interpreter of the information while
"dogged"
22:
dogged allows him to comment on that information by pointing out how the plan
is flawed. Further, high intensity implicit
graduation
occurs through the use of value-laden
language such as `invasion' and `ignored,' which culminate in the
negative evaluation of the information presented. Clause complexes 13
to 15 elaborate. Clause complex 13 exhibits interpersonalised
evaluatory markers in the form of adjectives: brutality, fear and
terror; clause complex 14 uses the experiential metaphor "reign of
terror" to imply that simply changing the government can and will
change the situation. Hence the stress on the democratically elected
government
23: interpersonalise:
evaluatory implies normalcy at the same
time as it strategically avoids the claim that Iraq is in the midst of
a civil war and that violence is escalating. Clause complex 15 repeats
the theme of the power of the democratically elected government
introduced in 14. Further, in this same clause complex, violence
becomes graded as "sectarian," a term affiliated with "lines,"
while the ideal of a democratically elected government is endowed with
power - one which confronts terrorist threats
24 and earns "trust" and
"confidence."
graduation
is employed throughout to highlight the
main objective of Bush's speech, which is to convince the American
people that the U.S. role in Iraq is not only necessary but also
successful. Stress is placed on the degree of responsibility that Iraqi
security forces are assuming through the use of "greater" in clause
complex 10
25 and specific
force is used to stress the importance of the new
"democratically"
26 elected government in clause complex 15. This culminates in Bush's
assertion that U.S. and Iraqi sacrifices have led to "historic
opportunity"
27 hence successfully minimizing the
focus on what has gone awry.
Clause complex 18 further sharpens Bush's
objective; it contains three examples of
graduation:
two of
force
and one of
focus.
Each builds up on the other to create the message of increasing
importance. Rhetorically, this is significant as the proposition
advances the security of America via the liberty of Iraq; hence,
everything depends on Iraq and the continued support of the American
public in a war with no apparent end in sight.
Discussion: Subjectivity in the texts and the role of authorial stance
Objective news reporting is generally viewed as all news reporting not
confined to the feelings of the journalist. In other words, the
propositions and proposals put forth in the article are those belonging
to another source. In this way, news reporting is objective because it
does not involve the writer's opinions, feelings, or judgments on a
particular matter. On the other hand, subjective news reporting reports
an incident from the perspective of the writer. The problem, as White
(1998) points out, is that journalists collect the news from sources
and present it in the form of either direct or indirect speech, and
sometimes a bit of both. Journalists also present to readers what they
see, and thus there is therefore no clear-cut way to decide whether
the writer is positioning him or herself objectively or subjectively
when attributed propositions are used.
Definitions of subjective and objective reporter voice make clear that
objective news reporting is based on the theory that news reporting may
be viewed as objective as long as all evaluative judgments, arguments,
and contentions are confined to the words of external sources. The
dilemma with this type of reasoning is that attributed propositions
cannot be truly separated into more subjective or less subjective based
on whether direct or indirect forms of quoting are used. According to
White (1998), the uses of direct quotation is perhaps more objective
than the use of indirect quotations which require authorial
interpolation. The choice between presenting information in the form of
a direct, as opposed to an indirect quotation can have direct
implications on reader interpretation. These implications are
rhetorical because the words used to convey the meanings may in fact
alter the original meanings intended by the attributed source.
Essentially, the problem is one of certainty, where what is at stake
has everything to do with how certain the reader is that the
information presented in the indirect quotation is exactly what was
initially said and understood. Of the two texts in question, it is
apparent that each is objective in nature, with degrees of subjective
insertion built in.
Of the 10 instances of attributed propositions
Pickler uses
28, two are endorsed,
29 one is disendorsed (see: 8) and seven are
neutral; the remainder of the propositions are in the form of
Bare
Assertions. Textually, Pickler inserts five
and assimilates the remainder of her attributed propositions. From the
position of authorial stance, it may be argued that Pickler is slightly
less objective than Gugliotta, particularly since her choice of
material pushes the reader towards viewing the war as one which is
other than what Bush presents, and specifically since so much of her
article is based on bare
assertions - the subject matter of which
only furthers to create a specific ideological frame different from
what Bush presents and from the topic that she is said to be reporting
on: Bush's address to the nation.
Gugliotta's text, which is slightly longer
than Pickler's, contains seven endorsed
30 and nine neutral
attributions
31; he presents three
bare assertions
32and uses two
33 to not only interpret information for the
reader, but also to present an ideological position, one which casts
doubt on the information of success presented by Bush to the readers.
Of the attributed material, ten of the propositions have been inserted
as direct quotes. By using a large number of direct quotes, Gugliotta
maintains objectivity to a greater degree than does Pickler, at least
from the perspective of authorial stance. This is based on the
assumption that the insertion of quoted speech puts more stress on
objective writing than does assimilated reported speech, which assumes,
to some degree, that information in the proposition may have been
interpreted and perhaps reformulated from its original to suit the
needs of not only the journalist, but also the institution (White
1998). Both writers confine their attributions to high status sources,
namely President Bush and other White House Representatives; Gugliotta
also refers to White House Fact Sheets, based, it is assumed, on
various statistical analyses and surveys compiled by various White
House representatives and/or government institutions.
Solidarity and Bare Assertion versus Heteroglossia
When a writer opts to present an argument as
given, he or she does so at the risk of the information which has
already been presented. In other words, a
bare
assertion must and will be taken into
consideration by the reader from the perspective of where it is coming.
Thus, because bare
assertions are inextricably socially and
interpersonally charged, they do enter into relationships with the
information which has been presented before and perhaps with the
information which is yet to be uncovered by the reader.
Bare
assertions appear in both articles and
serve particular strategic positions. Of the two texts, Pickler uses
bare
assertion to present an image of an
unsettled America, one which has not given up the struggle to end the
war in Iraq. The bare
assertion, therefore, serves to not only
inform, but also, more subtly, to introduce the frame of People against
the State. By including herself into the text, Pickler has the unique
ability to present information in an objective fashion using language
which, although value-laden is still implicitly attitudinal and not
out-rightly condemning. In fact, the interweaving of data represented
through the slogans and chants of the protestors helps preserve her
relationship of solidarity with the reader because her uses of
Bare
Assertion are typically confined to
subjective observations of the protestors - observations which serve
to propel her point forward but still maintain her integrity.
Like Pickler, Gugliotta also uses
bare
assertion to point out that Americans are
discontent and have to a great degree, "lost confidence in the
administration's Iraq strategy" (see:7); in clause complex 12, he
explicitly includes himself into the text by analyzing what the fact
sheet does not mention, and in this way, presents information very much
akin to that of Pickler. Hence, although the degree of Bare Assertion
used by Pickler may be unsettling to some readers, not only through
information and language choice but also through the barrage of numbers
that are thrown at the reader through the
bare
assertions, Gugliotta's quiet
interpretation and inclusion into the text also serves a very important
role, one which is arguably slightly more subjective and thereby
dangerous from the position of solidarity.
In contrast, when a writer uses heteroglossic
representation to present a proposition, the heteroglossic
representation recognizes the possibility of heteroglossic opposition
(White 1998, 2007a, 2007b). Heteroglossia assigns some responsibility
for the proposition to an external source. From the perspective of the
reader, it is clear that a particular intersubjective stance is being
adopted and likewise, depending on the heteroglossic resources being
used, the proposition may be either dialogically contractive or
expansive. The more dialogically expansive a heteroglossic proposition
appears to be, the less at risk solidarity becomes, since this type of
representation allows the reader to maintain the possibility of
entertaining different dialogic positions and voices (White 1998,
2007b). As White puts it, it is in the best interest of the media to
choose heteroglossic representation above that of
Bare
Assertions, since it is in the form of
heteroglossic representation that the greatest number of readers will
be influenced and reached (White 1998). Of course, although
heteroglossic representation may be the representation of choice,
solidarity may still be at risk because content of information is more
important that attribution itself.
Conclusion
As the articles under examination demonstrate, the current war on terror
is as much about the rhetoric of freedom and victory as it is about the
war. Considered in context, both articles represent a rhetoric of war
- one where the message is constructed through a value-laden
language with specific goals in mind. For the most part, the writers
both present information which creates an internal division between
groups of Americans: those that are for the war and those against it.
Thus, while Pickler focuses on the protestors and uses numbers to
enhance the degree of discontent, Gugliotta interprets findings for the
reader by including himself into the text, thereby assuring that a
level of understanding has been met - even if solidarity is
breeched.
The media view any war from the perspective of
its position on it: it is either just or unjust. When reporters write
about `just' wars, chances are that the ideological and political
ramifications are high, as are the reputations of the countries and
politicians at stake. Gugliotta opens his article with just a stance
noting that "on the eve of the third anniversary of the Iraq invasion,
President Bush yesterday promised to `finish the mission' with
`complete victory" urging the American people to remain steadfast but
offering no indication of when victory may be achieved" (2). Since war
is a heavily laden word, Gugliotta's use of "invasion" may be
interpreted in two ways: he has avoided the use of war, since war is
never really just, or, he has chosen to use "invasion" because it
represents an ominous quality, far different from `war', which, at the
very least requires two parties willing and necessary to participate.
Invasion, however, has no such romantic qualities; it does imply, at
the very least, forceful takeover of land and resources. On the other
hand, Pickler focuses her reiteration of the events by presenting what
has not been mentioned - the word war. By focusing on why the
President may not have chosen to use the term war, she also introduces
the value-laden `invasion' and in this way, she makes invasion more
devious, more unjust. Numbers advance the presentation of discontent
regarding the war, not only because these numbers reference partisan
deaths, but also because they tangibly portray the frame of "People
against the State." In each case, therefore, the frame of the
"Fairy-Tale Just War" has been replaced with one that has higher-
reaching ideological implications. Gugliotta replaces the Fairy-Tale
with "A Nation is a Person," and in this way, he shows how
unrelenting Bush is when it comes to achieving victory at any cost.
Pickler replaces the fairy tale with "People against the State." In
either case, the Fairy-Tale Just has been shattered, and America is
at war even if the President won't admit it.
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Footnotes:
1Based on a hypothetical example
2see clause complex 4:
"... to a public that is increasingly skeptical... and clause
complex 2: "...touting the efforts to build..." as examples
of implicit subjective evaluations - author as observer and
interpreter.
3see: 2 Judgment: negative
4see: 7
Dialogism: Expansion: Attribute: Acknowledge
5see: 11 as an example of Appreciation:
negative: composition
6see:
2,4, 6, 8, 9, 11,13, 14.
7see: 1,
3.
8see for example, 8, 11, 14.
9see: for
example 20, 21.
10see: 7 Appreciation: Negative:
Composition and Extra-vocalised: Expansion: Attribute: Acknowledge
functioning to Disclaim: Deny clause complex
6)
11see 11: Appreciation: composition: negative:
fragile
12see: 1, 2, 3, 5, 14, 15, 16, 17, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23,
24
13see: 4, 6, 7, 9, 10, 11,12,
13
14see 4, 9,10, 12, 13
15see clause complex 14:
"...
U.S. led war in
Iraq...
16See clause
complex 15 & 16 citing 200 protestors and clause complex 19 citing
1000 and clause complex 20 citing 2000
protestors
17An example of
Appreciation: negative: quality:
oppressive
18An example of
Engagement: Contractive: Proclaim:
Pronounce
19An example of +graduation: focus:
sharpen
20See 8:
+graduation: force: fused: experientialise: measure: grader:
lowest ever.
21An example of +graduation: force:
fused: experientialise: measure: grader
22An example of +graduation: force: fused:
experientialise: metaphor
23An example of +graduation: force:
fused
24An example
of +grader: force: implicit value
laden
25An example of +graduation: force: solitary:
grader: grade:
greater
26An example of +graduation:
force: fused: interpersonalise: evaluatory
27An example of +graduation: focus:
sharpen
28see: 4, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13,
18
29see 11,
13
30see: 1, 2, 8, 9,
11, 12, 15
31see: 3, 4, 5, 6, 13, 14, 16, 17,
18
32see: 7,
10, 12
33see 10,
12