Viktoria Jovanovic-Krstic 
	  University of Toronto
	  viktoria.jovanovic.krstic@utoronto.ca
      Framing the War on Terrorism? Linguistics Variation, Perspective and Iraq 
      
        
      
      
        
      
      October 7, 2002, President George Bush delivered his Address to the
      Nation on Iraq stating quite firmly:
      
        
      
      America believes that all people are entitled to hope and human rights
        - to the non-negotiable demands of human dignity. People
        everywhere prefer freedom to slavery; prosperity to squalor,
        self-government to the rule of terror and torture. America is a
        friend to the people of Iraq. (October 7 2002 whitehouse.gov). 
      
        
      
      Shortly after President Bush's Address, the
      "war on terror" was expanded to include Iraq. In the press,
      perspective is everything, and nowhere has this been more apparent in
      recent history than in the much publicized war on terrorism. Ideally,
      the fundamental function of press journalism is to inform the reader;
      therefore, a journalist's interpersonal positioning must enable or
      facilitate negotiation not only with readers but also with the
      institutions directly implicated by the stories being produced (Martin
      and White 2005). Spinning and framing is therefore at once both
      linguistic manipulation and variation, as well as strategic packaging,
      including but not limited to, the physical placement of the story and
      the exposure of key terms and ideas, such as `war on terrorism.' When
      journalists frame news stories, they express and strategically
      manipulate rhetoric, sources, positioning, tone, and headlines with the
      purpose of representing and presenting a particular perspective on
      `reality;' it is the classic case of 
same news, different views.
      
        
      
      This paper will demonstrate that the press
      frames and varies the perspective of news stories in order to achieve a
      particular ideological goal. The focus is a comparative account of the
      third year anniversary of the American-led invasion of Iraq,
      examining Guy Gugliotta's (March 19 2006) assessment of America's
      military effort in the war on terror in Iraq (washingtonpost.com) and a
      similar article written by Nedra Pickler (March 20 2006, boston.com
      article). Using Appraisal Theory's systems of
      Attitude, Engagement, and Graduation
      the focus will be on how writers use rhetoric to pass judgment,
      appreciate situations, and express attitude and emotion towards the
      events in question. Since attribution of external sources effects the
      framing of information in news stories, the paper will also compare
      aspects of intertextual positioning within the two texts.
      
        
      
      Framing: a rhetoric
      
        
      
      According to J. Herbert Alstschull (1984),
      information in the press is a direct result of the ideology of the
      times. The news is framed to present the content of the day (Borchers
      2005). Hence, framing is a product not only of the institution of the
      press, but also of those who finance the press and those who control
      politics (Hicks 2006). Frames resemble topics or central themes, in
      that they organize the news story to make it accessible and interesting
      to the reader. Frames are also metaphorical in nature; they present the
      something-is-like-something else relationship to readers and this
      helps readers make connections, often between things they would never
      consider connecting on their own. From a placement perspective, frames
      are usually grouped together in a logical manner; hence, combatitive,
      consensus and conjecture frames are the typical frames found in war
      reporting. Metaphorically, these three typical frames tend to reflect
      the America-as-Hero, the State-as-Person System, and
      particularly in the current war on terrorism, the Fairy-Tale of the
      Just War (Lakoff, 1991, 2003). Taking each of these typical frames In
      turn, combative frames are usually centered around very specific themes
      or topics. Since the beginning of the war on terror, the combative
      frames characterizing many newspaper articles have revolved around
      playing out a number of very popular metaphorical scenarios,
      specifically War-as-Violent-Crime, where there are clear winners
      and losers. According to Lakoff, (1991: 4) this metaphor "highlights
      strategic thinking, team work, preparedness, the spectators in the
      world arena, the glory of winning and the shame of defeat". Another
      common metaphorical frame is that of the Irrational Villain. In the
      current war on terror, Saddam Hussein was presented as above all
      cunning, strategic and evil. Hence, it was clear from the beginning
      that as well as being amoral, vicious, and a villain, he was also
      irrational - the key ingredient to convince a reading public that
      war alone would improve the situation in present day Iraq and rid the
      world of weapons of mass destruction. Finally, in order for the
      metaphorical frame of the Fairy Tale of the
      Just War to be believable, it must contain a
      hero who survives a treacherous terrain and an evil monster whom the
      hero must engage in battle and conquer. Victory can only be achieved in
      the Fairy-Tale of the Just War when the villain is defeated and the
      victim or victims are rescued (Lakoff 1991: 2).
      
        
      
      Appraisal Theory and the rhetoric of framing
      
        
      
      As a method of analyzing discourse,
      Appraisal
      Theory
      (AT)
      concerns itself with how writers express and negotiate ideological
      positions. The-se beliefs usually take the position of binary opposites:
      good or bad, appropriate or inappropriate behaviour, and they tend to
      illustrate what should or should not happen in the world, thereby
      setting one society or culture apart from another.
      Appraisal
      Theory is a functional theory which views
      language from a social perspective as a theory of choice. Hence, it
      stems from the notion that writers make choices and that these choices
      are subjective not objective. Thus, writers choose to present the news
      in one way as opposed to another; they choose to represent information
      strategically by avoiding certain issues and concentrating on others.
      
        
      
      Like many theories,
      AT is
      ideologically laden, but it chooses to examine ideology
      lexicogrammatically by defining and describing how writers use language
      to examine, negotiate and maintain their ideology.
      Appraisal
      Theory examines negotiation in action based
      on three very specific systems: the system of
      Attitude,
      the system of
      Engagement
      and the system of Graduation.
      
        
      
      Attitude - the system of Evaluation: Affect, Judgment, Appreciation
      
        
      
      As a method of analyzing discourse, AT
      concerns itself with how writers express and negotiate ideological
      positions in discourse.
      Attitude
      is the system which examines the rhetoric of evaluation, attitude, and
      emotion based on the sub-systems of
      Affect,
      Judgment
      and
      Appreciation.
      
        
      
      Attitude: Affect
      
        
      
      Affect is
      concerned with how writers construe emotion. In the press, emotion can
      be represented either Authorially, using the first person, or
      Non-Authorially, where the writer is the source of the emotion by
      which evaluation is conveyed or where what is being described is not
      the writer's emotions but those of other people or groups (Iedema et
      al. 1994). Writers who construe emotion in their articles put
      solidarity between themselves and the readers at risk, since solidarity
      can only be maintained if the reader agrees with the writer's position
      and the evaluation of the phenomena in question (Iedema et al.,
      1994).
      
        
      
      Attitude: Judgment
      
        
      
      The subsystem Judgment is concerned with how writers evaluate people based on socially accepted norms. Appraisal Theory recognizes two mutually exclusive perspectives: Social Esteem and Social Sanction.
      
        
      
      Social Esteem is based on evaluations in which the
      person or group being judged is raised or lowered in the esteem of his,
      her or their community; social esteem has no legal or moral
      implications. It is concerned with evaluations of Normality, Capacity,
      and Tenacity (White 2006) measured on a cline of positive and
      negative.
      
        
      
      Social Sanction is based on evaluations in which the person or group is being judged on the basis of legality or morality. Social Sanction is concerned with evaluations of Veracity (truth) and Propriety (ethics). Like Social Esteem,
      Social Sanction is measured on a cline of positive and negative.
      
        
      
      Writers may indicate Judgment in one of two ways: explicitly or implicitly. Explicit Judgment is clearly indicated with a lexical marker which shows a positive or negative evaluation, for example: "What a 
monster!"
      Implicit Judgment may be less clear-cut. The system of Attitude: Judgment recognizes two types of implicit judgment: Evoked Judgment and Provoked
      Judgment.
      
        
      
      Evoked: Judgment has no evaluative language present in the proposition; nevertheless, although it appears factual, the information which is presented still
      manages to imply either positive or negative evaluation because it stands out from what can be considered normal/abnormal or good/bad behaviour, for example: "Bush marks Iraq date, omits using `war' word" (Judgment: evoked: negative: veracity - target Bush) (Pickler, headline, Associated Press, Boston Globe, boston.com March 20, 2006) and "For some, the temptation to retreat
      and abandon our commitments is strong," (Gugliotta, quoting Bush, clause 4, Washington Post, March 19, 2006). (Judgment: evoked: negative: social esteem: tenacity: resolve. Target: those who wish to abandon the efforts of the government).
      
        
      
      Provoked: Judgment also has no explicit markers of Judgment, but evaluative language is being used to direct the reader towards either a positive or negative
      evaluation of some person or group of people, for example "Turning our
      backs on postwar Iraq today would be the modern equivalent of handing
      postwar Germany back to the Nazis" (Pickler quoting Rumsfeld, March
      20, 2006).
      
        
      
      Attitude: Appreciation
      
        
      
      Appreciation is concerned with how writers evaluate products and processes based on the subsystems of Reaction, Composition, and Valuation.
      Hence, under Reaction a product or process is examined from the perspective of its impact (either positive or negative) on the writer; under Composition
      the makeup of a product or process is evaluated either positively or
      negatively; finally, under Valuation the evaluation is concerned with the content of the product or process according to popular social convention.
      
        
      
      Engagement - the discourse of framing: sourcing and intertextual dialogism
      
        
      
      Engagement is the system whereby writers regulate and negotiate the arguability of their utterances, and it is concerned with the resources that writers
      use to include and adopt a position towards what they typify as the
      viewpoints, opinions, and words of other writers and/or speakers
      (Iedema et al., 1994; White 1998, 2007a, 2007b). This notion of
      objectivity is construed through the use of quoted material and through
      the belief that, for the most part, journalists have been "taught" to
      view the world in an objective fashion and to present their findings
      accordingly. Nevertheless, a study by the 
Project for Excellence in Journalism (PEJ) 2006 have found that the
      typical narrative frame of the inverted pyramid (the straight news
      account of a story) accounted for only 16% of front page stories. The
      remaining stories all revolved around frames which required some level
      of interpretation from the journalist: a subjective perspective. In
      short, according to the PEJ journalists are taking a decidedly
      interpretative role in their presentation of the news. By framing the
      news around stories of conflict, injustice, irony, winners and losers,
      journalists are framing an ideological perspective - one which
      inadvertently dominates how a story may be interpreted and accepted by
      the reading public. Hence, as White (1998) notes, "even the most
      ostensibly `factual' report will be the product of numerous value
      judgments" (White 1994:3). These judgments determine what goes into
      the article and what stays out, and which sources are quoted directly
      and those which are presented as reported projections of information
      that has already been interpreted and, at the very least, analyzed.
      This next section examines how the system of Engagement: Attribution and Sourcing can be used to analyze framing effectively in text.
      
        
      
      Engagement: Attribution and Sourcing
      
        
      
      Under the framework for the system of Engagement,
      a number of options enable a writer to vary the terms by which he or
      she engages with attributed sources and alternate positions in the news
      article (White 2007a, 2007b; Iedema et al., 1994). Hence, writers frame
      how they present a proposition through the sources which they choose to
      include (or avoid) and through the grammatical resources of the
      language that allow them to choose how they will represent a
      proposition to readers. When writers opt to explicitly cite personal
      names, or to identify groups and/or people as source types, they
      construct a relationship of trust with the reader based on the belief
      that they are attempting to provide reliable and truthful information.
      The opposite is said to be true when generic, unnamed, or collective
      sources are used; then, writers actively choose to distance themselves
      from the issue, and therefore risk presenting information which is too
      general or untrue - information that they choose not to take
      responsibility for. Hence, by examining not only who is taking
      responsibility for the utterance, but also how much responsibility is
      being attributed, as well as whether the writer is purposefully
      distancing him or herself from the utterance by using disendorsed
      attribution. Issues such as these are interesting from a rhetorical
      perspective because they recognize that the utterance invariably
      affects the rhetorical thrust of the text and solidarity between the
      reader and the writer.
      
        
      
      Endorsement and Disendorsement issues of relevance
      
        
      
      This presentation of data must be further evaluated as being either neutral, endorsed, or disendorsed, and then as either closed or open to further dialogic positions according to the implications each choice carries. Neutral
      utterances are typically set off by the verb `to say.' Neutrality implies that the writer neither believes nor questions the truth validity of the proposition(s), but rather is just presenting the information. Endorsed utterances are those which the author indicates support for or agreement with the proposition either directly or indirectly. Endorsed utterances are therefore represented as being reliable or true and in the very least, convincing and believable, for example: "He also pointed out that Iraqi political leaders themselves called for calm after the Samarra attack" (Hauser, clause 24 NYT, March 19, 2006). White (2007b) also points out that writers may, at once, indicate that they support or endorse a proposition at the same time as they distance themselves: 
the President finally acknowledged that he had made a mistake1. Here the lexical item 
acknowledge carries with it many connotations. First, 
acknowledge indicates that the President only hesitantly came to offer up the proposition 
that he had made a mistake. Indeed, (
finally) 
acknowledged carries with the same implications as conceded or admit in that the President was somehow made to admit the
      truth, 
that he had made a mistake. Therefore, although the proposition may be true, the positive endorsement is not of the quoted source but of the proposition itself (White 2007b). Disendorsement allows writers to distance themselves from an utterance through quoting verbs such as "to claim" and "to
      allege." Specific lexical items such as `surprisingly," for example, also serve to indicate disendorsement in a somewhat more indirect manner because the proposition is set up to be read as unexpected, unusual or uncharacteristic. White (2006) also recognizes that disendorsement allows writers to deny or reject the attributed proposition.
      
        
      
      The system of Engagement allows a writer to make a choice with respect to endorsement: if he or she choose non-endorsing, he or she agrees to be
      neutral, but, if the choice is one of endorsement, the writer must choose between the options of endorsement or disendorsement, and ultimately, this puts a strain on reade-writer solidarity by framing the proposition and the text as a whole towards a particular point-of-view.
      
        
      
      The function of intertextual dialogism in framing
      
        
      
      Writers negotiate the arguability of their utterances in a text by presenting the proposition as either extra-vocalized information (information which has been attributed to another) or as bare assertion (information which has not been attributed and which must therefore belong to the writer).
      
        
      
      When a writer chooses to use another to represent information (i.e. a quoted source), he or she must represent that information as either truthful and valid or as problematic. The differences between using 
said versus 
show versus 
claim therefore become more than just a choice of verb; they
      affect dialogic positioning. Thus, for example, the verb word 
show presupposes the truth validity of the proposition in question while 
claim does the opposite (White 1994, 2006). The implications affect whether the proposition is being represented as dialogistically expansive or contractive - as whether they are open or closed to further interpretation and to alternative dialogic positions.
      
        
      
      White (2006) and Miller (2004) suggest that there are a number of factors which determine the dialogistic positioning of extra-vocalised information including, but not limited to, the degree of authority indicated by the source and the degree to which the writer endorses (or disendorses) the attributed material. Thus, once a proposition has been observed as Attributed (either acknowledged or
      distance),  it may be further divided into a proposition which is represented as
      dialogically expansive (open) or dialogically contractive (closed). The
      categories of dialogically contractive propositions are Proclaim: Pronounce,
      Concur, Endorse and Disclaim: Deny, Counter, while those of the dialogically expansive or open type are Entertain: Evidence, Likelihood, Hearsay, and
      Attribute: Acknowledge and Distance. Neutrality is maintained through the use of the attributed reporting words 
said or 
told.
      
        
      
      Graduation - Using rhetoric to focus and force information
      
        
      
      The system of Graduation is concerned with locating values in language that scale other meanings (Attitude or Engagement) either by "locating them on a scale of high to low intensity or from core to marginal membership of a category" (White 1998:25) across the Appraisal system. Graduation is concerned with a wide array of lexical and some grammatical resources, with the most prominent being adverbs, nouns and verbs. These lexical and grammatical resources are then scaled along two parameters: Focus and Force. Each will be discussed below.
      
        
      
      Scaling: Focus and Force
      
        
      
      The virtues of Focus scale other meanings in terms of the softness or sharpness of the relationship represented by the item (White 2007a:31). At the soft end,
      values are exemplified by hedges or vague language indicating incompleteness: "sort of," "all this stuff," "kind of nerve-wracking," etc. (Eggins and Slade 1997:137, White 2007a:31). At the sharp end of the Focus scales, values of Graduation are represented by core terms which are sharply focused: "true friend," "pure evil," "hooded thugs" etc. (White 2007a:31). Under
      Focus, scaling operates in contexts that are not gradable in any concrete way.
      Instead, it is concerned more with a sense that some values in the semantic
      Focus have been either softened or sharpened through the process of
      broadening or narrowing.
      
        
      
      By raising or lowering the intensity of the semantic categories, the values of
      Force contrast with those of Focus. Under Force, grading operates with little problem since it is specifically concerned with values which express different degrees of some core meaning (White 2007a). Typically, values of force
      are realized by adverbials, adjectives, verbs or modals. Force is therefore either implicit (
adore versus 
love versus 
like) or explicit (
slightly, somewhat, really) (White 2007a:32). Implicit values of Force
      operate across Appraisal categories and are not confined to the system of
      Graduation. Explicit values of Force, on the other hand, can and do operate within the system of Graduation and are divided into Graders and Amplifiers.
      
        
      
      Issues in intensity - grading versus amplification
      
        
      
      White (1998, 2007a) divides scales of Force into two broader categories:
      Graders and Amplifiers. Graders are lexical items such as adverbs and adjectives which specify degrees of intensity from high to low, e.g. 
completely satisfied, 
very satisfied, 
slight fall, 
severe fall, etc. (White 1998:26-27). Graders are also realized through items of
      Measure, resources for grading extent or number. Measure is realized both interpersonally and experientially. Interpersonally, Measure is the application of intensity to some mode of counting where the writer's subjectivity is at stake. Experientially, counting is typically realized as a numerative with the noun group thereby having an objective status to some external reality. Thus, the experiential "fourteen protesters screaming" is interpersonalised as "lots of
      protesters screaming" (White 1998; White 2007a). The broad category of
      Amplifier is different from those of Grader primarily in that Amplifiers specify solely for maximum degrees of intensity. Amplifiers may be subcategorized along two separate axes: isolating versus fused and experientialised
      versus interpersonalised.
      
        
      
      Isolating Amplifiers are typically realized in one of two ways: colour (
bloody awful day) and repetition (
he laughed and laughed and laughed) (White 1998; 2007a). Isolating Amplifiers are typically realized by individual lexical items with the sole purpose of raising or lowering intensity. fused Amplifiers are such since they do two things at once: they specify some degree of intensity at the same time as they code a separate semantic value (White 1998:27). There are five major categories of fused Amplifiers: Metaphor (prices 
skyrocketed), Quality ( the car 
veered off the road); Evaluatory
      (
desperate bid); Universalise (
the talks went on endlessly); and
      Measure Plus (
minuscule, huge, gargantuan) (White 1998, 2007a).
      fused Amplifiers are then further subdivided into those which are  interpersonalised or those which are experientialised. Accordingly, fused
      Amplifiers of Metaphor and Quality belong to the experientialise subcategory since both Metaphor and Quality amplifiers exhibit material processes (White 1998:29). The remaining three: Evaluatory (intensity entailed by appraisal value), Universalise (intensity entailed by measure or usuality) and Measure
      Plus (intensity fused with measure) are all examples of the subcategory of
      interpersonalise fused amplifiers.
      
        
      
      Description of methodology and outline of results
      
        
      
      Two days were spent searching for appropriate texts for analysis. The two chosen were based on the following criteria: word count, topic, hard news format, date of publication relevant to topic (No earlier than March 19, no later than March 20) and country of printing (American vs Canadian, vs International paper). The texts under consideration appear in the body of this paper. Each
      has been divided into numbered clauses. Each of the texts was analysed
      using AT systems of Attitude, Engagement and Graduation. The analysis was done on a clause-by-clause basis. First, the texts were divided into clause
      complexes, then each clause was individually analysed for delicacy. The
      findings have been tabulated below in the form following Miller (2004).
      After an examination of each text from the position of AT, a comparative on the topic of framing is presented; however, as space limits preclude the possibility of an in-depth analysis of all clauses, global results have been provided in sections 5.0.1 and 5.0.2 below.
      
        
      
      Global results for text one "Bush marks Iraq date, omits using `war'
        word,"
      
        
      
      by Nedra Pickler, Associated Press, published in the Boston Globe and
      boston.com March 20, 2006, with the description based on Miller
      (2004):
      
        
      
      
        
        
        
        
          
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                 Total number of clause complexes: 24 Appraisal: Attitude Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing instances of the system: Total number of instances of Attitude: Judgment = 16 (see:1, 2, 3, 4, 6, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 18, 22, 23) Appreciation = 12 (see: 2, 4, 7, 8, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 19, 20, 21, 24) Affect = 0 From the perspective of delicacy and subsystem Judgment Inscribed: Judgment = 0 Implicit: Judgment = 16 Social Esteem = 9 Social Sanction = 7 Total number of cases of implicit Judgment either provoked or evoked: Total number of instances of: Provoked: Social Sanction = 4 Evoked: Social Sanction = 3 Total number of instances of Provoked: Social Esteem = 8 Examples of positive provoked: Social Esteem = 6 Examples of negative provoked: Social Esteem = 2 Examples of evoked social Esteem = 1 From the perspective of delicacy and subsystem Appreciation Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing attitude: appreciation: 12 Specifically: Reaction: 5 (see: 2, 4, 19, 20, 21) Composition: 7 (see: 7, 8, 11, 12, 15, 16, 24) Valuation: 0 From the perspective of delicacy and the subsystem Affect: 0 Total number showing authorial affect = 0 Total number showing non-authorial affect = 0 Appraisal: Engagement: Attribution and Dialogical Positioning Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing attribution: 10 Specifically: Endorsed: 2 (see 11, 13) Neutral: 7 (see: 4,6, 7, 9, 10, 12, 18, ) Disendorsed 1 (see 8)
                  
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                 Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing
                extra-vocalisation/dialogism Specifically: Contraction: 4 (see:4, 7, 11, 13) Expansion: 8 (see: 4, 6, 8, 9, 10, 12, 18) Specifically: Contraction: Proclaim: Pronounce = 1 (see 4) Contraction: Proclaim: Concur = 0 Contraction: Proclaim: Endorse = 1 (see 13) Contraction: Disclaim: Counter = 1 (see 11) Contraction: Disclaim: Deny = 1 (see 7) From the perspective of Expansion, specifically = 8 Expansion: Entertain: Evidence = 0 Expansion: Entertain: Likelihood = 0 Expansion: Entertain: Hearsay = 1 (see 6) Expansion: Attribute: Acknowledge= 6 (see 4, 6, 9, 10, 12, 18) Expansion: Attribute: Distance = 1 (see 8) Number of Clauses showing Bare Assertions: 14 (see: 1, 2, 3, 5,
                14, 15,16, 17, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24) Appraisal: Graduation Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing the system of
                graduation: 24 Total instances of Force: 20 ( see:2, 4, 7,8, 12, 13, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23) Total instances of Focus: 4 (see: 7, 13, 20, 24) Delicate Breakdown of Force in clause complexes: Specifically: Solitary examples of Force = 3 Force: Graders = 2 (see 7, 13) Force: Repeat = 1 (see 22) Force: Colour = 0 Specifically: Fused examples of Force in Clause complexes: 17 Fused: experientialise: Measure = 12 (see: 8,14, 15, 16,
                17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23) Fused: experientialise: Metaphor = 2 (see: 2, 12) Fused: experientialise: Quality = 1 (see: 10)
                  
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                 Fused: interpersonalise: Measure-Plus = 0 Fused: interpersonalise: Evaluatory = 2 (see: 4, 11) Fused: interpersonalise: Universalise = 0 Delicate breakdown of Focus: 0 Instances of focus: soften : 0 Instances of Focus: sharpen: 0
                  
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      Global results for text two: "As Iraq War Heads Into 4 Year, Bush Pledges `Complete Victory,"' by Guy Gugliotta, Washington Post, and washingtonpost.com March 19, 2006, with the description based on Miller
      (2004):
      
        
      
      
        
        
        
        
          
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                Total number of clause complexes: 18
                 Appraisal: Attitude Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing instances of the system: 12 Total number of instances of Attitude: Judgment = 7 (see: 4. 6, 8, 11, 16, 17); Appreciation = 9 (see: 5, 7, 8, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 18) Affect = 0 From the perspective of delicacy and subsystem Judgment Inscribed: Judgment = 2 (see: 17) Implicit: Judgment = 5 (see: 4, 6, 8, 11, 16) Social Esteem = 6 (see: 4, 6, 8, 11, 16) Social Sanction = 1 (see: 17) Total number of cases of Inscribed: Judgment Social Esteem = 0 Social Sanction= 1 (see: 17) Total number of cases of implicit Judgment either
                provoked or evoked: 5 Total number of instances of: Provoked: Social
                Sanction = 1 (see: 16) Evoked: Social Sanction = 0 Total number of instances of Provoked: Social Esteem = 3 (see: 6, 8, 11) Examples of positive provoked: Social Esteem = 0 Examples of negative provoked: Social Esteem = 3 (see: 6, 8, 11)
                  
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                 From the perspective of delicacy and subsystem Appreciation Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing attitude: appreciation: 7 Specifically: Reaction: 1 (see: 13) Composition: 4 (see: 8, 11, 12, 15) Valuation: 2 (see: 14, 18) From the perspective of delicacy and the subsystem Affect: 0 Total number showing authorial affect = 0 Total number showing non-authorial affect = 0 Appraisal: Engagement: Attribution and Dialogical Positioning Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing attribution: 17 (see: 1, 2, 3, 4,5,6, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18)
                *note: 10 & 12 show only partial attribution; they are intravocalised in nature Specifically: Endorsed: 7 (see: 1, 2, 8, 9, 11, 12, 15) Neutral: 9 (see: 3, 4, 5, 6, 13, 14, 16, 17, 18) Disendorsed 1 (see: 10) Total number of instances in the clause complexes showing
                extra-vocalisation/dialogism Specifically: Contraction: 11 (see: 2, 3, 5, 6, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18) Expansion: 6 (see: 1, 4, 8, 9, 10, 11) Specifically: Contraction: Proclaim: Pronounce = 8 (see:2, 3, 5, 6, 13,
                14, 16, 17, 18) Contraction: Proclaim: Concur = 0 Contraction: Proclaim: Endorse = 0 Contraction: Disclaim: Counter = 0 Contraction: Disclaim: Deny = 0 From the perspective of Expansion, specifically = 6 Expansion: Entertain: Evidence = 1 (see: 11) Expansion: Entertain: Likelihood = 1 (see: 4) Expansion: Entertain: Hearsay = 0 Expansion: Attribute: Acknowledge = 3 (see: 1, 8, 9) Expansion: Attribute: Distance = 1 (see: 10) Number of Clauses showing Bare Assertions: 3 (see: 7, 10, 12)
                  
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                 Appraisal: Graduation Total number of clause complexes showing the system of graduation:
                11(see: 1,2, 8, 9, 10,12, 13, 14, 15, 17, 18) Total instances of Force: 8 (see: 8, 9, 10, 13, 14, 15, 17, 18) Total instances of Focus: 3 (see: 1, 2, 12) Delicate Breakdown of Force in clause complexes: Specifically: Solitary examples of Force = 4 Force: Graders = 4 (see: 9, 10, 18) Force: Repeat = 0 Force: Colour = 0 Specifically: Fused examples of Force in Clause complexes: 8 Fused: experientialise: Measure = 2 (see: 8, 9) Fused: experientialise: Metaphor = 2 (see: 12, 14) Fused: experientialise: Quality = 0 Fused: interpersonalise: Measure-Plus = 0 Fused: interpersonalise: Evaluatory = 3 (see: 13, 14, 17) Fused: interpersonalise: Universalise = 1 (see: 15) Delicate breakdown of Focus: Instances of focus: soften: 1 (see: 12) Instances of Focus: sharpen: 3 (see: 1, 2, 18) | 
        
        
        
        
      
      Text One (566 words)
      
        
      
      By Nedra Picker, Associated Press, boston.com.
      March 19, 2006
      
        
      
      http://www.boston.com/news/world/middleeast/articles/2006/03/20/bush_marks_Iraq_dat...
      Retrieved March 27, 2006 and checked September 29, 2007.
      
        
      
      
        -  Bush marks Iraq date, omits using `war' word
          
            
           
-  Washington - President Bush marked the anniversary of the Iraq war
          yesterday by touting the efforts to build democracy there and avoiding
          mention of the daily violence that has raged, three years after he
          ordered an invasion.
          
            
           
-  The president did not use the word "war."
          
            
           
-  "We are implementing a strategy that will
          lead to victory in Iraq," the president said to a public that is
          increasingly sceptical that he has a plan to end the fighting after the
          deaths of more than 2,300 US troops.
          
            
           
-  Antiwar protests were held throughout the country over the weekend,
          including a rally in Washington.
          
            
           
-  Bush said he spoke with US Ambassador to Iraq Zalmay Khalilzad, who said
          progress was being made by Iraqi leader to form a government.
          
            
           
-  Earlier yesterday, former Iraqi prime minister Ayad Allawi said his
          country was in the midst of a civil war.
          
            
           
-  Over the weekend, several administration officials repeated the theme
          that progress continues toward building a unified Iraqi government and
          nation.
          
            
           
-  "Now is the time for resolve, not retreat," Defense Secretary Donald
          H. Rumsfeld wrote in a column for The Washington Post.
          
            
           
-  "Turing our backs on postwar Iraq today would be the modern equivalent
          of handing postwar Germany back to the Nazis."
          
            
           
-  Yet there were acknowledgments from the top commander of US forces in
          Iraq that the situation is fragile and that he did not predict the
          strength of the insurgency.
          
            
           
-  "I did not think it would be as robust as it has been," General George
          W. Casey said on NBC's "Meet the Press."
          
            
           
-  "And," he added "it's something that, obviously, with my time here on
          the ground, my thinking on that has gained much greater clarity and
          insight."
          
            
           
-  The third anniversary of the US-led war in Iraq drew tens of thousands
          of protesters around the globe, from hurricane-ravaged Louisiana to
          Australia.
          
            
           
-  About 200 war veterans, hurricane survivors, and demonstrators gathered
          yesterday at the national cemetery in Chalmette, La., to protest how
          the military conflict overseas had hurt the country's ability to help
          the Gulf Coast recover from last year's hurricanes.
          
            
           
-  About 200 joined a march yesterday down Fifth Avenue in New York.
          
            
           
-  One slogan was: "We the People Need to do More to End the War."
          
            
           
-  Seventeen people were arrested for disorderly conduct, police said.
          
            
           
-  A rally Saturday in Times Square drew more than 1,000.
          
            
           
-  More than 7,000 people marched through Chicago on Saturday.
          
            
           
-  Others marched in Boston, in San Francisco, and in Pittsburgh.
          
            
           
-  Antiwar rallies in Japan yesterday drew about 800 protesters chanting
          "No war! Stop the war!" and banging drums as they marched through
          Tokyo toward the US Embassy.
          
            
           
-  A day earlier, about 2,000 rallied in the city.
          
            
           
-  Protesters also gathered outside the US Embassy in Malaysia, and at
          least 1,000 people turned out in Seoul, which has the third-largest
          contingent of foreign troops in Iraq after the United States and
          Britain.
          
            
           
        
      
      Discussion of findings - remarks on Attitude and Engagement
      
        
      
      According to White (1998, 2007), strictly
      objective media texts are constructed through the elimination of any
      authorial input whatsoever. Nevertheless, White also (1998, 2007a,
      2007b) recognizes that although the only true measure of subjective
      authorial insertion is through the use of personal pronouns, implicit
      subjective markers can be inserted through the use of specific words
      and evaluations of circumstances
2 that would not necessarily be
      considered examples of purely objective reporting but that do not make
      it an entirely subjective text either.
      
        
      
      Pickler's text reveals not only implicit
      authorial input through the use of
      bare
      assertions but also strategic use of frame
      development and strategic placement of attributed material. Thus,
      although the article is represented as an objective text --there
      are no markers of explicit authorial insertion through personal pronoun
      usage and no explicit linguistic evidence of the author's value
      judgments - the article does have a strong underlining implicit
      subjective aspect. Hence, it is an example of how press journalists can
      combine both subjective and objective representation of an event
      spinning it in order to break down the current existing frame -
      here, the "Fairy Tale Just War" - to build up and develop a
      distinct anti-war frame through the strategic use of attribution and
      attributed proposition, evaluative language, and repetition of
      numbers.
      
        
      
      Attitudinal and Intertextual Positioning within the text
      
        
      
      An analysis of
      Attitudinal
      and
      Intertextual
      positioning reveals the following patterns: the article commences by
      presenting the accepted narrative hard-news frame of objective news
      reporting, beginning with a lead and developing the story of Bush's
      address to the nation on the third anniversary of the war in Iraq.
      However, the use of strategically placed evaluative language such as
      "invasion,"
3:
      provoked: social sanction rather
      than "war" in reference to America's role in Iraq, as well as
      "touting" (see: 2) and "marked" (see: 2) to represent Bush's speech
      serve to position Pickler's ideological perspective on America's
      involvement in Iraq as other than entirely supportive. Further, use of
      propositions by sources such as Ayad Allawi
4 but with an
      underlining message that disclaims Ambassador Khalilzad's statement
      that democratic progress is being made. and
      General George W. Casey's acknowledge that the situation in Iraq is
      "fragile"
5 as well as Dialogism: Contraction:
      Disclaim: Counter and volatile
      (see: 11-13) In combination, the strategies present Pickler's
      anti-war perspective. implicitly, but the message is quite clear
      through specific evaluative markers and high degrees of
      bare assertion
      using numbers as markers of force.
      
        
      
      Attitudinally, the examples are almost equally
      divided between the subsystems of
      Judgment: Provoked
6 and
      Judgment:
      evoked and examples of
      Appreciation:
      Composition
      and Appreciation:
      Reaction respectfully.
      Judgment:
      Provoked
      and
      Evoked
7 and
      Appreciation:
      Composition
8and
      Reaction
9 Examples of
      Judgment
      have for the most part the negative evaluative target of Bush and/or US
      occupation.
      
        
      
      The use of
      Attitude:
      Appreciation to evaluate the function and
      process of the peace rallies and/or the situation in Iraq make up the
      remaining examples of
      Attitudinal
      evaluation. Appreciation:
      Reaction (see: 4) reflects the public's
      growing scepticism of Bush's plan in Iraq.
      Appreciation:
      Composition is used once (see 8
      Appreciation:
      positive: composition:
      Progress) in an extra-vocalised
      attributed assimilated disendorsed statement by unnamed administration
      officials quoted as repeating 
"the
      theme that progress continues toward building a unified Iraqi
      government and nation," once, to
      explicitly Disclaim:
      Deny the positive state of affairs in Iraq
      (through the process of Expansion:
      Attribute: Acknowledge
10 and
      twice
11and 12: Appreciation: composition: negative:
      robust to evaluate the strength of the
      insurgency. The remaining examples of
      Appreciation:
      Composition
      reflect the positive participation and resolve of anti-war protestors
      and marches which extend across the US and outside of the US in
      Malaysia and Seoul (see 14- 24).
      
        
      
      Bare assertions versus sourcing, status and textual integration
      
        
      
      According to White (1998), the challenge for
      the media is to present one version of a story through the use of
      "selective heteroglossia" without putting solidarity at risk.
      Obviously, ideological, political and socio-economic factors affect
      the way news is delivered by the press. More precisely, the media often
      models the ideal ideological and political perspectives represented by
      people in power; and, for the most part, it is always in the media's
      best interest to present war as a set of oppositions: the good and the
      bad, the villain and the victim, the people and the state. Presented in
      this way, the reality of any situation is easier to handle, and far
      more acceptable to readers. However, all is not always
      black-and-white, and the news, although "reliable," may in fact
      be biased.
      
        
      
      Choosing Bare Assertions over Heteroglossia: what it means to the reader in issues of solidarity
      
        
      
      There are direct rhetorical implications to
      choosing bare assertions (monoglossia) over heteroglossia in any
      discourse the main implication being solidarity. Solidarity as defined
      by White (1998) has more to do with the relationship that is maintained
      by the writer and the reader than with the necessity of the writer and
      reader agreeing on point of view. As White notes, negotiations of
      solidarity must leave room for the act of negotiating. This means that
      although a reader and writer may not see eye-to-eye on an issue, if
      a degree of empathy or sympathy for a cause can be maintained, then
      solidarity may still be salvaged (White 1998). Solidarity is always at
      risk when a writer presents a proposition in an unattributed form: the
      Bare
      Assertion.
      
        
      
      Of the 24 clause complexes in Pickler's text,
      14
12 are Bare Assertions,
      eight
13 have been attritubuted to some higher
      source power such as President Bush, Former Iraqi President Allawi,
      Defence Secretary Donald Rumsfeld and one (see: 8) has been categorized
      as medium (on a hierarchy of high, medium, and low) and is attributed
      to various unnamed White House Administration Officials. From the
      position of textual insertion, five of the propositions are direct
      quotes
14 and
      the remainder have been assimilated. That Pickler has chosen to present
      most of the propositions in her text as a
      Bare
      Assertion is important, since the
      presentation of any information in the form of a
      Bare
      Assertion always has consequence.
      
        
      
      For White (2007b), bare assertions are not
      simply facts to be ignored. Rather,
      bare
      assertions serve a particular rhetorical
      function as either examples of power or solidarity. Often, these
      evaluations are in the form of subjective observations of either the
      mental states of participants not directly involved in the text or of
      the physical surroundings of the geographic areas that the subject is
      occurring in. In either case, power monoglosses put at risk the
      writer/reader relationship, as these monoglosses tend to assume a
      certain degree of generality. Solidarity bare assertions are
      propositions represented as common knowledge.
      
        
      
      Graduation: using numbers to propel the message for-ward
      
        
      
      In this text, graduation is used to
      dramatically draw the reader's attention towards the events of March
      20, 2006 by using implicit and explicit examples of fused amplifiers
      and solitary graders to guide the reader towards taking a stand against
      the war, and more importantly, to outline America's growing antagonism
      towards its role in Iraq. Numbers, repetition and movement across
      geographical space are the keys means of achieving this goal.
      
        
      
      Explicit repetition occurs when a lexical term
      or terms is repeated with the effect of drawing the reader's attention
      to some concept or idea. In this text, examples of explicit repetition
      force: solitary:
      grade are few; however, Pickler does begin
      the article by purposefully drawing the reader's attention to what
      Bush's speech does not do - it omits reference to the word `war'
      - and as she repeats this proposition explicitly in clause complex
      3, implicitly in clause complex 2, and again in clause complex 7
      through attribution and classification of "civil war," Pickler's
      negative appreciation of Bush's war becomes obvious. The use of partial
      reiteration through substitution is important and occurs in clause
      complex 2 through the use of the term "invasion," which draws the
      reader's attention once again to Pickler's anti-war stance and
      position. Rhetorically, "invasion" may be graded as rhetorically and
      attitudinally more negative than the term war, as war implies two
      parties and can be romanticized as in the notion of `just wars';
      however, invasion implies forced entry, hostile takeovers and
      brutality. The stark negative stance that Pickler takes on Bush's role
      in Iraq is amplified by the bare assertion in clause complex 3: "The
      President did not use the word "war [.]"" Not only does the
      repetition implicitly evaluate the honesty of the President, but also
      the proposition in clause complex 4 - anticipated and alluded to
      through the use of a bare assertion in clause complex 3 - explicitly
      classifies the public that Bush is addressing in his speech as
      "increasingly sceptical," thereby using clause complex 3 to position
      the upcoming "America against the State" frame.
      
        
      
      In fact, Pickler refers explicitly to Bush's
      role in Iraq only once
15 but in doing so, she
      strategically creates an anti - `just war' frame by inundating the
      reader with numbers. Quantification is used throughout the article as a
      means of implicit and explicit force. Martin and White (2005) and White
      (1998, 2007a) assert that, although intensification can occur through
      the use of explicit graders such as `very,' implicit graduation of
      non-attitudinal lexis can also occur. Thus, in clause complex 8, the
      quantifier "several" is used to draw the reader's attention to the
      "administration officials," who are repeating the theme "that
      progress continues toward building a unified Iraqi government and
      nation," and thereby furthering the divide between the
      truth-validity of the source - Bush himself - and Pickler's
      spin. The problem here stems from the ideology underlining the message
      of negative truth veracity implied through the use of "several
      administration officials 
      repeat[ing] the theme..." as
      repetition of a general idea; this seems to imply spinning of that
      idea. Further, although she makes reference to the extravocalised
      source, she disendorses herself from the proposition through the use of
      "repeated the theme," implying to a degree that she neither supports
      the truth validity of the proposition nor the nature with which it was
      intended.
      
        
      
      Further, the inclusion of a specific number to
      a situation, such as anti-war rallies, can be interpreted as offering
      an attitudinal evaluation of sorts. In the case of Pickler's text,
      numeration is used extensively to propel the message and the reader
      forward towards some negative judgment about America's and specifically
      Bush's role in Iraq. The quantity of the sources provided from clause
      complex 13 onward offers not only a degree of truth validity to the
      overall frame that this is not a fairy tale just war that Pickler is
      creating, but also to the unstated yet clear ideological position that
      Pickler is adopting. Numeration thus results in grading the phenomenon
      as amount and, to some degree as extent (White and Martin 2005), and it
      plays an important role in the text particularly from the position of
      amplification. In fact, quantification through numeration becomes the
      central means of focusing the reader's attention on Bush's growing
      skeptical public and the anti-war movement itself. From clause
      complex 13 onwards, Pickler uses numbers to evaluate, from the position
      of either
      judgment
      or
      appreciation,
      the circumstances surround the third anniversary of the US-led war
      (clause complex 14). Further, she presents the data cumulatively
      through repetition of numbers (see "200" repeated in clause complexes
      15 and 16) that become progressively larger
16 and geographically vast moving
      from the US to Asia. Thus, through the resources of
      graduation:
      Force,
      Pickler has succeeded in breaking down the frame of "America as Hero"
      and installing the frame of "People against the State". This is
      important, as it represents an ever-growing ideology - one which
      was not as prevalent, or at least not as published, at the beginning of
      the war.
      
        
      
      Text Two (455 words)
      
        
      
      By Guy Gugliotta, 
Washington Post, March 19, 2006
      
        
      
      http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/03/18/AR200603 
      1801256_... 
      Retrieved March 27, 2006 and checked September 29, 2007.
      
        
      
      
        -  As Iraq War Heads Into 4
          year, Bush Pledges `Complete Victory'
          
            
           
-  On the eve of the third anniversary of the Iraq invasion, President Bush
          yesterday promised to "finish the mission" with "complete victory,"
          urging the American public to remain steadfast but offering no
          indication when victory may be achieved.
          
            
           
-  "More fighting and sacrifice will be required," Bush said in his
          weekly radio address.
          
            
           
-  "For some, the temptation to retreat and abandon our commitments is
          strong.
          
            
           
-  Yet there is no peace, there's no honour, and there's no security in
          retreat.
          
            
           
-  So America will not abandon Iraq to the terrorists who want to attack us
          again."
          
            
           
-  Bush's address comes at a time when confidence in the administration's
          Iraq strategy appears to have reached a new low.
          
            
           
-  A Washington Post-ABC News poll this month found that 65 percent of
          Americans think that Bush has no plan for victory, while 35 percent
          - the lowest ever recorded by the poll - think he does.
          
            
           
-  A White House fact sheet on Iraq noted that casualties from the devices
          have been halved in the past 18 months and that nearly half of the
          devices are being found and disabled before they can be detonated.
          
            
           
-  The fact sheet also buttressed the president's assertion last week that
          Iraqi security forces are assuming greater battlefield responsibility.
          
            
           
-  Democrats noted last week, however, that a recent Pentagon report said
          the number of "Level 1" Iraqi units capable of operating
          independently of the United States had dropped from one to zero.
          
            
           
-  For the most part, the fact sheet ignored the missteps and false starts
          that have dogged the war since the invasion on March 19, 2003, and
          instead contrasted Iraq under Saddam Hussein with Iraq today.
          
            
           
-  Three years ago, the fact sheet said, "life in Iraq was marked by
          brutality, fear and terror," and Iraqis "had no voice in their
          country or their lives."
          
            
           
-  Today, it said, "the reign of terror has been replaced by a
          democratically elected government."
          
            
           
-  In his address, Bush noted that sectarian violence plagues Iraq, but he
          urged Iraqis to "reach across political, religious and sectarian
          lines," to convert December's democratic elections into a "government
          that can confront the terrorist threat and earn the trust and
          confidence of all Iraqis."
          
            
           
-  "These past three years have tested our resolve," he said.
          
            
           
-  The enemy has proved brutal and relentless...and our troops have
          shown magnificent courage and tremendous sacrifices" which, along with
          Iraqi sacrifices, had given Iraq a "historic opportunity" to rebuild
          itself.
          
            
           
-  "The security of our country is directly linked to the liberty of the
          Iraqi people," Bush said, "and we will settle for nothing less than
          complete victory."
          
            
           
        
      
      Discussion of findings: Attitude, Engagement and Graduation
      
        
      
      The text opens with a rhetorically powerful
      headline that not only sets the stage for the entire article but also
      frames it within the two voices of the text: Bush and the writer. The
      use of "pledges" in the headline is the first example of implicit
      subjectivity in the 18 clause complexes making up the article. The
      theme throughout will be to elaborate on the notion of "complete
      victory," using the phrase to ideologically frame the major conquests
      gained by Americans in Iraq in the last three years, and to highlight
      the expectations of Americans in the future. It will also be the means
      of maintaining solidarity and creating unity with the reader through
      the use of specific markers of graduation: force and focus, attitude:
      Judgment: social esteem and strategic use of dialogic positioning.
      
        
      
      Framing through Attitude and Engagement
      
        
      
      Clause complex 1 "As Iraq War Heads Into
      4
      Year, Bush Pledges `Complete Victory"' has no markings of
      Attitude
      but the use of explicit graduation:
      focus: sharpen in `Complete Victory'
      coupled with the insertion of what appears to be an authorial use of
      the implicit high intensity verb `pledges' sets the tone of the entire
      article. Clause complex 2 like 1 has no explicit marking of Attitude.
      However, as in 1, there appears to be an authorial inclusion in the
      form of `urging the American public to remain steadfast but offering no
      indication when victory may be achieved.' We may interpret this to be
      Negative: Judgment: Social Esteem:
      Capacity/Tenacity where what is at stake is
      Bush's ability to follow through with the `complete victory' pledged in
      clause complex 1. The clause itself is therefore more likely
      categorized as an instance of both extra and intra-vocalisation,
      where extra-vocalisation is apparent clearly through the partially
      assimilated proclamation made by President Bush, while
      intra-vocalisation appears near the end of the clause as a form of
      assessment, one where the ability of the President to follow through is
      questioned. This affects solidarity in that those readers who agree
      with the assessment will read on; on the other hand, the other two
      effects of the question are to create irony (picked up by the
      subsequent reference to sacrifice and `minor' failure) and to question
      the meaning of the term. Hence, those with a vested interest in
      `complete victory' may not appreciate Gugliotta's authorial insertion
      and the recognition of this fact.
      
        
      
      It is through clause complex 3 - "More
      fighting and sacrifice will be required..." - that Gugliotta
      begins framing the main claim of the text: victory will necessitate
      sacrifice. What is being presented, therefore, is an example of
      Attitude: Judgment:
      Evoked:
      Tenacity,
      where the target of evaluation becomes the American people who are not,
      at this point, being offered an opportunity to open the proposition to
      further consideration or discussion. By presenting the clause complex
      in the form of engagement:
      contractive:
      proclamation,
      Bush is presenting a situation which, if the American people want to
      win, they must follow through on. The use of high intensity implicit
      graduation
      through the modal verb phrase "will be required" further stresses
      this obligation.
      
        
      
      To further the ideological goal of the text, clause complexes 3, 4, 5,
      and 6 offer examples of carefully constructed links between ideology
      and framing and specifically, the role of America in attaining Bush's
      ultimate goal - complete victory:
      
        
      
      
        -  (3) "More fighting and sacrifice will be required," Bush said in his weekly radio address.
-  (4) "For some, the temptation to retreat and abandon our commitments is
        strong.
-  (5) Yet there is no peace, there's no honour, and there's no security in
        retreat.
-  (6) So America will not abandon Iraq to the terrorists who want to
        attack us again."
        
      
      In each, the following patterns are obvious:
      from the perspective of
      Engagement:
      Attribution
      all of the propositions are framed as neutrally attributed meaning that
      Gugliotta neither entirely endorses nor disagrees with the truth
      validity of the propositions. From the position of
      Engagement:
      Dialogism, the four clause complexes are
      presented as contractually closed to further discussion in the form of
      pronouncements and yet, they are addressed to the American people as a
      type of appeal. Solidarity is constructed through the use of `our' in
      clause complex 4 and `us' in clause complex six. This inclusion is not
      only important, but also deliberate, since it enhances the message of
      the necessary and honourable course of action presented in complexes 4
      and 5. Clause complexes 4 and 5 share the pattern of no specific
      graduation
      markers; however, the implicit intensity illustrated through the
      repetition of "retreat" in both clauses, first as a temptation and
      abandonment and then as an elaboration through isocolon gradiatio where
      "retreat" represents a lack of peace, honour and security, require
      examination. Clause complex 4 is an example of
      Expansion in the form of
      Entertain:
      Likelihood
      with a high degree of negative
      evoked
      judgment:
      social
      esteem:
      tenacity:
      resolve, where the targets are those who
      wish to abandon America's efforts of victory. Again, the inclusion of
      this recognition in the piece is rhetorically important particularly
      when dialogically contracted against clause complex 5
      (Contraction: Proclaim:
      Pronounce) which implicitly criticizes the
      act of retreat in the form of
      Appreciation: negative:
      valuation by assigning it negative value
      and aiming it at the target audience of those who do not support
      America's war effort. It becomes an ideological conflict between `us,'
      the supporters of the war effort, and `them,' the protestors. Clause
      complex 6 becomes a very important proclamation when through the use of
      high intensity modalisation: obligation/probability and
      provoked:
      Judgment:
      Social
      Esteem:
      Tenacity
      he makes very clear his position on the war of terror and therefore
      announces his plan, not only for himself and his country, but also for
      the integrity and tenacity of the American people as a whole.
      
        
      
      Breaking down the Fairy Tale Just War frame through attribution and sourcing and dialogism
      
        
      
      Unlike Pickler, Gugliotta presents only three
      propositions in the form of a bare
      assertion (see: 7, 10, 12), and each works
      to further the theme "unstable administration" - which is based
      to a degree on the premise that in a `just war' everyone is on the same
      side. The importance of the bare
      assertion in clause complex 7 is
      highlighted through the interpretation of the material presented in the
      Fact Sheet and used by Bush as the basis of his pledge to `complete
      victory.' Clause complexes 10 and 12 interpret the information in the
      Fact Sheet, thereby putting it in direct conflict with clause complexes
      11, 13, and 14, each of which is rhetorically significant and worthy of
      examination:
      
        
      
      
        -  (11) Democrats noted last week, however, that a recent Pentagon report
        said the number of "Level 1" Iraqi units capable of operating
        independently of the United States had dropped from one to zero."
-  (13) Three years ago, the fact sheet said, "life in Iraq was marked by
        brutality, fear, and terror" and Iraqis "had no voice in their
        country or their lives."
-  (14) Today, it said, "the reign of terror has been replaced by a
        democratically elected government."
        
      
      To begin, neither of these clauses attempt to
      discuss the nature of the situation in Iraq nor to make any reference
      to the widely rumoured `civil war' occurring. Clause complex 12, points
      to the major fault of the fact sheet used by Bush as the basis of his
      `complete victory' speech. Although not a
      bare
      assertion in the true meaning of the term,
      it nevertheless has implications of intra-vocalisation, namely
      through the use of interpretation. The high level instances of
      evaluative language through "dogged" and "invasion" in clause
      complex 12 serve to classify America's role in Iraq as less just and
      more tyrannical in nature. The weak simple comparison in clause complex
      14 presents another dilemma: the notion that simply replacing
      governments can eradicate fear is not only ridiculous but also
      hypocritical, since clause complex 11 maintains that "Iraqi units
      capable of operating independently of the United States had dropped
      from one to zero," and thus the situation appears less stable than it
      was in the recent past. Clause complex 13
17 is strategic attribution since
      although it is a proclamation
18, the main function of clause
      complex 13 is to highlight the
      expansive
      extra-vocalised
      proposition of 14, namely that "the reign of terror has been replaced
      by a democratically elected government." Ideologically, the
      proposition presents a pro-Western notion that once an oppressive
      government has toppled everything must just naturally fall into place.
      From the position of solidarity, clause complex 14 can put at risk the
      relationship fostered in the earlier half of the text and developed in
      the later half. Essentially, the problems lie in the information
      presented as clause complex 13 speaks of a quality of life while 14
      introduces information of a political and possibly ideological change.
      Neither, however, mentions the civil war, escalating violence and
      continued US deaths and so each appears to have been solely employed
      for the purposes of ideological enhancement.
      
        
      
      Clause complexes 15-18 take the reader
      through the last cycle of the text. Each is presented as
      Contractive: Proclaim:
      Pronouncement and this is significant
      because at the end, Bush leaves no room for discussion. Clause complex
      15 is dialogically significant and rhetorically important since it is
      the first time that sectarian violence in Iraq is addressed. From the
      position of attribution, the propositions in 15 are both endorsed.
      Attitudinally, the clause complex is an example of
      Appreciation:
      Composition:
      Balance: Negative:
      Discordant where what is being evaluated is
      Iraq as a country. From the position of voicing, the proposition is
      problematic. Presented as
      Engagement: Contractive: Disclaim:
      Counter it is at once a message to the
      American people as well as the Iraqis. Clause complexes 16 - 18 are
      in the most basic of terms an appeal to Bush's U.S. citizens.
      Positive
      Provoked: Judgment: Social Esteem:
      Tenacity: Resolve is used to reiterate the
      need to US commitment, heroism, and bravery. Also important to note is
      the use of personal pronouns as an obvious strategy to maintain
      reader/speaker - writer alignment and thus: "our resolve" (16),
      "our troops," (17) "our country". These are contrasted with
      reference to "Iraqi sacrifices," (17) and "Iraqi people" who are
      intended to be seen as part of the group, but who do not fall within
      the full realm of "our" since the "it" is the security of the US
      which is directly linked to the "liberty of the Iraqi people". This,
      in short, is the future dilemma for the war on terrorism, since as
      Gugliotta notes, quoting Bush, "nothing less than complete victory"
      will do.
      
        
      
      Remarks on graduation patterns of force and focus
      
        
      
      In this text,
      graduation
      is used to draw the reader's attention to the current situation in Iraq
      through intensity markers of both the implicit and explicit type.
      Beginning with clause complex 1 and continuing to 3
      graduation
      sets the tone, namely attaining "complete
      victory"
19 through the use of the explicit
      marker of "complete" and an implicit high intensity marker of
      extra-vocalisation located in the verb "promised" which sets the
      rhetorical aspect of the text and introduces Bush's requirement of more
      fighting and sacrifice from the American troops. Rhetorically, the text
      is at once a pledge of victory to the American people and a call to
      arms as well.
      
        
      
      In both cases,
      graduation
      is used to focus the reader's attention to the underlining message of
      discontent that Bush is attempting to play down but which Gugliotta
      makes reference to in clause complexes 7 and 8 through low intensity
      use of scaling with "appears to have reached," (see: 7) and then
      specific mention through "lowest ever."
20 Here, what is important is the
      gradual shift in meaning. In clause complex 7, the use of "appears"
      is strategic from a solidarity aspect since the use of "appears" is
      very different from an assertion such as "it did reach" or "it
      obviously reached," where the rhetorical implications would put the
      writer/reader relationship at risk. Clause complex 8 moves from the
      indecisive "appears" to a quantification of numerical type. The use
      of numbers - "65 percent" and then later "35 percent" offer
      information and aspects of authorial inclusion which introduces a
      subjective reading of the situation into the text; the further use of
      "lowest ever"
21 enhances Gugliotta's implicit assessment of Bush's plan by highlighting
      the negative composition of it through the use of measure to illustrate
      possible discontent.
      
        
      
      The resources of
      graduation
      are used tactically to inform the audience
      of not only the plan Bush has created or is creating but also the
      information set out in a White House fact sheet on Iraq. Clause complex
      12 uses
      focus
      and
      force
      advantageously. Focus:
      Soften "For the most part" inserts
      Gugliotta into the text as the interpreter of the information while
      "dogged"
22: 
dogged allows him to comment on that information by pointing out how the plan
      is flawed. Further, high intensity implicit
      graduation
      occurs through the use of value-laden
      language such as `invasion' and `ignored,' which culminate in the
      negative evaluation of the information presented. Clause complexes 13
      to 15 elaborate. Clause complex 13 exhibits interpersonalised
      evaluatory markers in the form of adjectives: brutality, fear and
      terror; clause complex 14 uses the experiential metaphor "reign of
      terror" to imply that simply changing the government can and will
      change the situation. Hence the stress on the democratically elected
      government
23: interpersonalise:
      evaluatory implies normalcy at the same
      time as it strategically avoids the claim that Iraq is in the midst of
      a civil war and that violence is escalating. Clause complex 15 repeats
      the theme of the power of the democratically elected government
      introduced in 14. Further, in this same clause complex, violence
      becomes graded as "sectarian," a term affiliated with "lines,"
      while the ideal of a democratically elected government is endowed with
      power - one which confronts terrorist threats
24 and earns "trust" and
      "confidence."
      
        
      
      graduation
      is employed throughout to highlight the
      main objective of Bush's speech, which is to convince the American
      people that the U.S. role in Iraq is not only necessary but also
      successful. Stress is placed on the degree of responsibility that Iraqi
      security forces are assuming through the use of "greater" in clause
      complex 10
25 and specific
      force is used to stress the importance of the new
      "democratically"
26 elected government in clause complex 15. This culminates in Bush's
      assertion that U.S. and Iraqi sacrifices have led to "historic
      opportunity"
27 hence successfully minimizing the
      focus on what has gone awry.
      
        
      
      Clause complex 18 further sharpens Bush's
      objective; it contains three examples of
      graduation:
      two of
      force
      and one of
      focus.
      Each builds up on the other to create the message of increasing
      importance. Rhetorically, this is significant as the proposition
      advances the security of America via the liberty of Iraq; hence,
      everything depends on Iraq and the continued support of the American
      public in a war with no apparent end in sight.
      
        
      
      Discussion: Subjectivity in the texts and the role of authorial stance
      
        
      
      Objective news reporting is generally viewed as all news reporting not
      confined to the feelings of the journalist. In other words, the
      propositions and proposals put forth in the article are those belonging
      to another source. In this way, news reporting is objective because it
      does not involve the writer's opinions, feelings, or judgments on a
      particular matter. On the other hand, subjective news reporting reports
      an incident from the perspective of the writer. The problem, as White
      (1998) points out, is that journalists collect the news from sources
      and present it in the form of either direct or indirect speech, and
      sometimes a bit of both. Journalists also present to readers what they
      see, and thus there is therefore no clear-cut way to decide whether
      the writer is positioning him or herself objectively or subjectively
      when attributed propositions are used.
      
        
      
      Definitions of subjective and objective reporter voice make clear that
      objective news reporting is based on the theory that news reporting may
      be viewed as objective as long as all evaluative judgments, arguments,
      and contentions are confined to the words of external sources. The
      dilemma with this type of reasoning is that attributed propositions
      cannot be truly separated into more subjective or less subjective based
      on whether direct or indirect forms of quoting are used. According to
      White (1998), the uses of direct quotation is perhaps more objective
      than the use of indirect quotations which require authorial
      interpolation. The choice between presenting information in the form of
      a direct, as opposed to an indirect quotation can have direct
      implications on reader interpretation. These implications are
      rhetorical because the words used to convey the meanings may in fact
      alter the original meanings intended by the attributed source.
      Essentially, the problem is one of certainty, where what is at stake
      has everything to do with how certain the reader is that the
      information presented in the indirect quotation is exactly what was
      initially said and understood. Of the two texts in question, it is
      apparent that each is objective in nature, with degrees of subjective
      insertion built in.
      
        
      
      Of the 10 instances of attributed propositions
      Pickler uses
28, two are endorsed,
29 one is disendorsed (see: 8) and seven are
      neutral; the remainder of the propositions are in the form of
      Bare
      Assertions. Textually, Pickler inserts five
      and assimilates the remainder of her attributed propositions. From the
      position of authorial stance, it may be argued that Pickler is slightly
      less objective than Gugliotta, particularly since her choice of
      material pushes the reader towards viewing the war as one which is
      other than what Bush presents, and specifically since so much of her
      article is based on bare
      assertions - the subject matter of which
      only furthers to create a specific ideological frame different from
      what Bush presents and from the topic that she is said to be reporting
      on: Bush's address to the nation.
      
        
      
      Gugliotta's text, which is slightly longer
      than Pickler's, contains seven endorsed
30 and nine neutral
      attributions
31; he presents three
      bare assertions
32and uses two
33 to not only interpret information for the
      reader, but also to present an ideological position, one which casts
      doubt on the information of success presented by Bush to the readers.
      Of the attributed material, ten of the propositions have been inserted
      as direct quotes. By using a large number of direct quotes, Gugliotta
      maintains objectivity to a greater degree than does Pickler, at least
      from the perspective of authorial stance. This is based on the
      assumption that the insertion of quoted speech puts more stress on
      objective writing than does assimilated reported speech, which assumes,
      to some degree, that information in the proposition may have been
      interpreted and perhaps reformulated from its original to suit the
      needs of not only the journalist, but also the institution (White
      1998). Both writers confine their attributions to high status sources,
      namely President Bush and other White House Representatives; Gugliotta
      also refers to White House Fact Sheets, based, it is assumed, on
      various statistical analyses and surveys compiled by various White
      House representatives and/or government institutions.
      
        
      
      Solidarity and Bare Assertion versus Heteroglossia
      
        
      
      When a writer opts to present an argument as
      given, he or she does so at the risk of the information which has
      already been presented. In other words, a
      bare
      assertion must and will be taken into
      consideration by the reader from the perspective of where it is coming.
      Thus, because bare
      assertions are inextricably socially and
      interpersonally charged, they do enter into relationships with the
      information which has been presented before and perhaps with the
      information which is yet to be uncovered by the reader.
      Bare
      assertions appear in both articles and
      serve particular strategic positions. Of the two texts, Pickler uses
      bare
      assertion to present an image of an
      unsettled America, one which has not given up the struggle to end the
      war in Iraq. The bare
      assertion, therefore, serves to not only
      inform, but also, more subtly, to introduce the frame of People against
      the State. By including herself into the text, Pickler has the unique
      ability to present information in an objective fashion using language
      which, although value-laden is still implicitly attitudinal and not
      out-rightly condemning. In fact, the interweaving of data represented
      through the slogans and chants of the protestors helps preserve her
      relationship of solidarity with the reader because her uses of
      Bare
      Assertion are typically confined to
      subjective observations of the protestors - observations which serve
      to propel her point forward but still maintain her integrity.
      
        
      
      Like Pickler, Gugliotta also uses
      bare
      assertion to point out that Americans are
      discontent and have to a great degree, "lost confidence in the
      administration's Iraq strategy" (see:7); in clause complex 12, he
      explicitly includes himself into the text by analyzing what the fact
      sheet does not mention, and in this way, presents information very much
      akin to that of Pickler. Hence, although the degree of Bare Assertion
      used by Pickler may be unsettling to some readers, not only through
      information and language choice but also through the barrage of numbers
      that are thrown at the reader through the
      bare
      assertions, Gugliotta's quiet
      interpretation and inclusion into the text also serves a very important
      role, one which is arguably slightly more subjective and thereby
      dangerous from the position of solidarity.
      
        
      
      In contrast, when a writer uses heteroglossic
      representation to present a proposition, the heteroglossic
      representation recognizes the possibility of heteroglossic opposition
      (White 1998, 2007a, 2007b). Heteroglossia assigns some responsibility
      for the proposition to an external source. From the perspective of the
      reader, it is clear that a particular intersubjective stance is being
      adopted and likewise, depending on the heteroglossic resources being
      used, the proposition may be either dialogically contractive or
      expansive. The more dialogically expansive a heteroglossic proposition
      appears to be, the less at risk solidarity becomes, since this type of
      representation allows the reader to maintain the possibility of
      entertaining different dialogic positions and voices (White 1998,
      2007b). As White puts it, it is in the best interest of the media to
      choose heteroglossic representation above that of
      Bare
      Assertions, since it is in the form of
      heteroglossic representation that the greatest number of readers will
      be influenced and reached (White 1998). Of course, although
      heteroglossic representation may be the representation of choice,
      solidarity may still be at risk because content of information is more
      important that attribution itself.
      
        
      
      Conclusion
      
        
      
      As the articles under examination demonstrate, the current war on terror
      is as much about the rhetoric of freedom and victory as it is about the
      war. Considered in context, both articles represent a rhetoric of war
      - one where the message is constructed through a value-laden
      language with specific goals in mind. For the most part, the writers
      both present information which creates an internal division between
      groups of Americans: those that are for the war and those against it.
      Thus, while Pickler focuses on the protestors and uses numbers to
      enhance the degree of discontent, Gugliotta interprets findings for the
      reader by including himself into the text, thereby assuring that a
      level of understanding has been met - even if solidarity is
      breeched.
      
        
      
      The media view any war from the perspective of
      its position on it: it is either just or unjust. When reporters write
      about `just' wars, chances are that the ideological and political
      ramifications are high, as are the reputations of the countries and
      politicians at stake. Gugliotta opens his article with just a stance
      noting that "on the eve of the third anniversary of the Iraq invasion,
      President Bush yesterday promised to `finish the mission' with
      `complete victory" urging the American people to remain steadfast but
      offering no indication of when victory may be achieved" (2). Since war
      is a heavily laden word, Gugliotta's use of "invasion" may be
      interpreted in two ways: he has avoided the use of war, since war is
      never really just, or, he has chosen to use "invasion" because it
      represents an ominous quality, far different from `war', which, at the
      very least requires two parties willing and necessary to participate.
      Invasion, however, has no such romantic qualities; it does imply, at
      the very least, forceful takeover of land and resources. On the other
      hand, Pickler focuses her reiteration of the events by presenting what
      has not been mentioned - the word war. By focusing on why the
      President may not have chosen to use the term war, she also introduces
      the value-laden `invasion' and in this way, she makes invasion more
      devious, more unjust. Numbers advance the presentation of discontent
      regarding the war, not only because these numbers reference partisan
      deaths, but also because they tangibly portray the frame of "People
      against the State." In each case, therefore, the frame of the
      "Fairy-Tale Just War" has been replaced with one that has higher-
      reaching ideological implications. Gugliotta replaces the Fairy-Tale
      with "A Nation is a Person," and in this way, he shows how
      unrelenting Bush is when it comes to achieving victory at any cost.
      Pickler replaces the fairy tale with "People against the State." In
      either case, the Fairy-Tale Just has been shattered, and America is
      at war even if the President won't admit it.
      
        
      
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      Footnotes:
      
        
      
      1Based on a hypothetical example
      
        
      
      2see clause complex 4:
      "... to a public that is increasingly skeptical... and clause
      complex 2: "...touting the efforts to build..." as examples
      of implicit subjective evaluations - author as observer and
      interpreter.
      
        
      
      3see: 2 Judgment: negative
      
        
      
      4see: 7
      Dialogism: Expansion: Attribute: Acknowledge
      
        
      
      5see: 11 as an example of Appreciation:
      negative: composition
      
        
      
      6see:
      2,4, 6, 8, 9, 11,13, 14.
      
        
      
      7see: 1,
      3.
      
        
      
      8see for example, 8, 11, 14.
      
        
      
      9see: for
      example 20, 21.
      
        
      
      10see: 7 Appreciation: Negative:
      Composition and Extra-vocalised: Expansion: Attribute: Acknowledge
      functioning to Disclaim: Deny clause complex
      6)
      
        
      
      11see 11: Appreciation: composition: negative:
      fragile
      
        
      
      12see: 1, 2, 3, 5, 14, 15, 16, 17, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23,
      24
      
        
      
      13see: 4, 6, 7, 9, 10, 11,12,
      13
      
        
      
      14see 4, 9,10, 12, 13
      
        
      
      15see clause complex 14:
      "...
U.S. led war in
      Iraq...
      
        
      
      16See clause
      complex 15 & 16 citing 200 protestors and clause complex 19 citing
      1000 and clause complex 20 citing 2000
      protestors
      
        
      
      17An example of
      Appreciation: negative: quality:
      oppressive
      
        
      
      18An example of
      Engagement: Contractive: Proclaim:
      Pronounce
      
        
      
      19An example of +graduation: focus:
      sharpen
      
        
      
      20See 8:
      +graduation: force: fused: experientialise: measure: grader:
      lowest ever.
      
        
      
      21An example of +graduation: force:
      fused: experientialise: measure: grader
      
        
      
      22An example of +graduation: force: fused:
      experientialise: metaphor
      
        
      
      23An example of +graduation: force:
      fused
      
        
      
      24An example
      of +grader: force: implicit value
      laden
      
        
      
      25An example of +graduation: force: solitary:
      grader: grade: 
greater
      
        
      
      26An example of +graduation:
      force: fused: interpersonalise: evaluatory
      
        
      
      27An example of +graduation: focus:
      sharpen
      
        
      
      28see: 4, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13,
      18
      
        
      
      29see 11,
      13
      
        
      
      30see: 1, 2, 8, 9,
      11, 12, 15
      
        
      
      31see: 3, 4, 5, 6, 13, 14, 16, 17,
      18
      
        
      
      32see: 7,
      10, 12
      
        
      
      33see 10,
      12